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AtomicClop


Because "fantasy erotica" sounds better than "cartoon horse porn."

Comments ( 34 )

How should Shining Armor deal with an incorrigible graffiti artist?

Show her his spray can?

Look at the tags.

The secret ingredient is rape.

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Shhhh, it's a secret.

Twilight never told Shining what her nickname in the dorms was...

Cadance facehoofed. "I meant some sort of creative punishment!"

I read it as "cervical punishment". This is gonna be my band's name.

Would kill for a sequel, or at least a second chapter. An Orgy sounds about right.

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Would it be called "Fuck the Police"?

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I guess that's up to the original author.

'Artistic Expression' works too.

'A Story of Paint and Cum' if you wanna do a word play on George R.R. Martin's book titles.

I have no room to talk, I have almost as many deleted stories from how hated they are as I do stories that I kept published on the site. I might be weak, but I hate having stories with more downvotes than upvotes.

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I have about a dozen stories half written LOL. No telling what will be next.

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Well, I like your work. You get a follow and I can't wait to see more.

I have 3 stories in development and I plan to submit one for the upcoming Summer Sin Celebration. Never seems to be enough time.

Look at the tags.

You mean the graffiti, right?

RIGHT?

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Chapter title: "Literally" or "But In The Fun Way"

Artist: AtomicClop
Comedy tag: ???
What.

The non-con made me a little uncomfortable, but the ending was worth it!
Thumbs up!

Hey, anybody got the derp numbers for the cover art, you know, just asking for a friend of course.

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Glad you enjoyed!

Inspired by Shinodage, Derpibooru ID: 1908530

Cover art cropped from Otakuap, Derpibooru ID: 1184535

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Thanks man i-, I mean my friend appreciates it.
And keep up the good work I love your stories.

This is my first attempt to write a serious noncon fic, so constructive technical criticisms are welcome.

I'm gonna say this isn't a serious noncon fic, and that's a good thing! You're a fine writer, so I'm sure you could write a story that takes all the stuff that goes on in this fic seriously. And it would probably be a pretty good fic, objectively speaking. It just wouldn't be one I'd want to read! Unlike this one, which I liked a lot.

The non-con stuff isn't too harsh, too heavy, too real. It's just the right level for a clopfic, exciting and thrilling the readers as Shining Armor overwhelms Fresh Coat magically, physically and sexually (damn, you wrote him extra studly in this one!). The ending is both funny, and reinforces what's going on here: it's a rape fantasy written out as a fic, and it delivers.

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Ha, thanks!

And I meant "serious" as antonym to "madcap comedy," as is my usual for the noncon tag.

And it pleases me you identified correctly my goal: I definitely wanted to play up the rape fantasy aspects -- statistically, the most common kink/fantasy people report on surveys -- and not be Edgy McEdgeface torture porn. I wanted noncon to amplify the hotness, not quench it.

Excellent stuff!:rainbowwild:

11625073 For what it's worth, I think you succeeded masterfully in that regard.

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This is the angle to well-done rape porn that I think very few people really understand unless they have the distinct fetish themselves. While of course there's some who do enjoy the Edgy McEdgeface approach and put tons of focus on torture and suffering and injury and blood and suicidal-ideation-levels of emotional distress caused by the rape, the truly good stuff that even people who shy away from noncon can still enjoy is this right here where it's simply an element that makes the sex more enjoyable. Powerplay is meant to be a complimentary component to an existing spicy act, not redefine the act completely until it's more a torture scene than a smut scene.
You nailed it, and this was quite a fun little read that pulled off exactly what it set out to do.

I am positive this is a repost, I've read this story before months ago. Are people just deleting and reposting stories until they get picked up?

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I am positive this is a repost, I've read this story before months ago. Are people just deleting and reposting stories until they get picked up?

Well, you're wrong. I wrote this last week. Feel free to report it to the mods and prove me right.

"You were supposed to TRAP the perp, not TAP them!"

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Thank you, I appreciate the compliments and analysis!

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It looks like he's going to double tap her, at the very least.

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Yeah. I'm glad this wasn't the "One day, [insert character here] was walking along, happy with their new life in Ponyville, only for the townsfolk to give them the grim lesson that being happy is bad, and that their destiny is to be raped and sad" fic that seems to only exist for outrage clicks. Here, even if Shining acts weird at points in this story... it's porn. Even if it is non-con and he rejects her lack of consent every time, the main point is that this scenario is something Fresh Coat is fine with, which is demonstrated by the both of them enjoying this.

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Thanks! And yes, exactly my goal. To play up the "domination" and "loss of control" fantasy, not the... dark bits.

This was a interesting blast to read.

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Sticky Coating was my first thought too.
I think I prefer this story though. :twilightblush:

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Perhaps one should do a little digging before making accusations. :ajbemused:
Failing that, It is also possible to share one’s opinion while stopping short of outright accusing people of wrongdoing.

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