Luna has always seen Celestia’s caring nature towards their subjects but to Twilight it was different.
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I'm not crying, you're crying.
This was lovely, and made me feel all happy and warm inside. Thanks for writing.
This... this is beautiful!
Nope, this is liquid pride coming out of my eyes, not tears at how downright absolutely 100% beautiful this was!
Stupid ninjas cutting onions! Excellent look into the minds of the Royal Sisters and the motherly relationship between Celestia and Twilight. Loved it!
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I appreciate your kind words, thank you! :,)
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I'm glad you enjoyed it!!
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Thanks, it means a lot! <3
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Thank you!! :)
It's 3am.
And I'm crying.
This is beautiful.
It describes Celestia's bond with Twilight so well, so painfully well.
Twilight grew up with two mothers - one that had to love her from afar, and one that could actually show their love.
This hurts.
This hurts so much.
And yet.
I love it.
Not gonna lie i was close to crying about how sweet this was
Not bad.
The fact that i cried is normal, but crying infront of my best friends is something I thought I could hold in... well done!
Damn .. just damn .... 😭
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Thank you! :)) I've always loved the Celestia and Twilight moments, the heart-to-heart conversations they have throughout the show were always my fav. I'm glad I conveyed that here too!
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I'm touched it invoked that much emotion!! :)
Pretty well written, but i still find something to nitpick:
read that sentence and tell me what is not correct.
Like all have said before, this is incredibly lovely. I love motherly moments between these two.
You are good at writing and keep up the good work.