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stillwedding


writing stories to improve my creative writing

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Luna has always seen Celestia’s caring nature towards their subjects but to Twilight it was different. 

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Comments ( 13 )

I'm not crying, you're crying.

This was lovely, and made me feel all happy and warm inside. Thanks for writing.

This... this is beautiful! :pinkiesad2:

Nope, this is liquid pride coming out of my eyes, not tears at how downright absolutely 100% beautiful this was!

Stupid ninjas cutting onions! Excellent look into the minds of the Royal Sisters and the motherly relationship between Celestia and Twilight. Loved it!

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I appreciate your kind words, thank you! :,)

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I'm glad you enjoyed it!!

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Thanks, it means a lot! <3

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Thank you!! :)

It's 3am.

And I'm crying.

This is beautiful.

It describes Celestia's bond with Twilight so well, so painfully well.

Twilight grew up with two mothers - one that had to love her from afar, and one that could actually show their love.

This hurts.

This hurts so much.

And yet.

I love it.

Not gonna lie i was close to crying about how sweet this was

The fact that i cried is normal, but crying infront of my best friends is something I thought I could hold in... well done!

Damn .. just damn .... 😭

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Thank you! :)) I've always loved the Celestia and Twilight moments, the heart-to-heart conversations they have throughout the show were always my fav. I'm glad I conveyed that here too!

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I'm touched it invoked that much emotion!! :)

Pretty well written, but i still find something to nitpick:

And yet I still promised and I still guarded her slumber because seeing you so distraught over one pony was- truth be told, feigning.

read that sentence and tell me what is not correct.

Like all have said before, this is incredibly lovely. I love motherly moments between these two.
You are good at writing and keep up the good work.

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