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writing stories to improve my creative writing

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Prince Blueblood knew of Twilight Sparkle, practically everyone did. She was Princess Celestia’s personal student and rumoured to possess as much raw power as Star Swirl the Bearded himself. Blueblood was determined to acquaint her. But there was a problem, he can barely utter a word to her.

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Is their a sequal coming/ in development to this story?

Doesn’t seem like a 1 chapter story, yet it’s marked completed. Is this all that there’s supposed to be?

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Yup, just one chapter! But perhaps I'll develop the story even more, but I enjoy the hopeful ending, (maybe they do see each other again or they eventually drift apart). I just wanted to add more nuance to characters we don't see interact! :)

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Oh okay that makes sense.

Thank you for the clarification.

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I like the idea of them drifting apart then years later the gala happen and how he treats rarity gets then talking again

I always liked the idea that Blueblood is gentlemanly torwards ponies that are his own class.

Even if he looks down on lower class ponies like Applejack and Rarity, he treats others with courtesy.

I love how he has knowledge of literature. He might be a snob but he is a smart one too.

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This seems to take place before Twilight met her future friends. You might want to specify that in the story description.

Anyways I love how their relationship is scholarly and how awkward Blueblood is with her.

It's really hilarious how ignorant of romance he can be!

I think I really like Twiblood. Maybe I'll give a more detailed review later. But this was both cute, witty and smart. I love it!

Twiblood for life!

daw how adoreble and cute

really good story

sequel by any change?

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