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Two things Twilight learned the days before the Grand Galloping Gala. One: don’t cast spells to force you to stay awake. Two: who knew Discord would make such a brilliant dance partner?

When Twilight royally messes up before the grand galloping gala she sits in agony at the thought of having to see the very nobles at the gala who saw her collapse. However, in this self-deprecation she least expected Discord to be a source of comfort.

Now with a reading!

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Awww that was so nice I really like that story and seeing Discord helping Twilight to give her the confidence that she needed after she was humiliated in front of those ponies and even Discord gave her so much compliments and everything and he even invited her to the Grand Galloping Gala again really nice sometimes you just have to let loose don't worry how people think of you usually that never stopped me what I like to do and besides not everybody is perfect this was pretty good story keep up the good work

That was nice. Seeing Discord be a comforting nuisance is always a treat.

That was a very cute story.

agrue

think ya meant argue.

Loved the story! Twas a nice short read that gave me that nice warm lil feeling in my chest. good job, hope to see more of your work in the future.

That was a very cute and sweet story. Thank you :pinkiesmile:

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Fixed it! Thank you! :)

11185728
Agreed, I wanted to write this side of him as we don't really get to see it!

11185716
Ahhh, thank you! I really appreciate it! And yes exactly, the contrast between the two characters helps highlight the lesson.

Don't think I've read a story with Discord portrayed this positively. It's nice to see him properly reformed. :)

being yelled and braided

i think you may want to go over the story and iron a few things like this out

Possibly the best Twilight and Discord one-shot I have read :twilightsmile:

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Thank you for your input, I definitely will! I tend to still miss a lot of things even after rereading it a couple of times.

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Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it! :))

That was very nice. Discord, the concept, also includes shaking up dusty and hypocritical hierarchies. And if Discord, the Draconequus, wants to do that and be kind to a friend at the same time? It's excellent character growth.

Awww, cute. And it's always great seeing the Canterlot elite get knocked down a couple pegs.

Always nice to see Discord in a more gentle light.

That was so adorable. Though most of the time, discord is over the top, when he tones it down for someone he cares about, it really hits all the right buttons.

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Definitely agree! I wish we got to see it more in the series before it ended.

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I love this so much, thank you!!!

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