The Third Wheel

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The Third Wheel

All Celestia wanted was to have a nice date with Twilight. Too bad Luna can't help but join them.

Written for the Thirteenth Bimonthly Twilestia Contest.

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ChocolateDead

ChocolateDead #1 · Aug 2nd, 2022 · 1 · 1 ·

Intresting

Fable Caster

Fable Caster #2 · Aug 2nd, 2022 · 2 · 1 ·

Cute story, made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside.

...a bit heavy on the typos, though. Edit those out and this will be a very good story indeed ^^

Teal

Teal #3 · Aug 3rd, 2022 · · ·

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Thanks! I hunted down the spelling errors, so hopefully I got them all

Anonymous Changeling

Anonymous Changeling #4 · Aug 3rd, 2022 · 1 · ·

However, to the surprise of both Celestia and Twilight, Luna then took an extra chair and began sitting with them. Acting as if she had been invited to their date, Luna then began ordering a meal and conversing with both Celestia and Luna, thus leaving the white alicorn no time to spend alone with Twilight.

Luna is conversing with herself in this paragraph.

Teal

Teal #5 · Aug 3rd, 2022 · · ·

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Woops, missed that one, thanks!

GlitchyFox

GlitchyFox #6 · Aug 3rd, 2022 · 1 · ·

i was fully expecting there to be some sort of old contract celestia and luna signed that ment to marry or date one was to do so with the other aswell (i think the story with baked bean was what i was thinking about).
The ending was still sweet though

MooseWhisker

MooseWhisker #7 · Aug 3rd, 2022 · · ·

At that point, she was beginning to see that the situation could have been better resolved if she talked to her sister instead of getting mad at her. Regretting what she had done, he began cursing herself in her mind, as she realized that she was starting to repeat her mistakes from a thousand years ago.

Oops

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