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A frustrated writer who just wants people to like their stories.

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Good story.

Liked because of the idea, loved because of how it turned out! :yay:

Starlight is probably going to kill Twilight when she gets out.

Okay, this story is just hilariously terrible <3

Loved every single word.

7196008 Thanks! Glad you liked it. :twilightsmile:

Hahahahaha this was really cute and funny. Have a like! :pinkiehappy:

7206041 Thank you! :twilightsmile:

cease and deceases

It's "Cease and Desist." Decease would imply someone dying. Desist means to stop further action.

A cease and desist is saying to stop your actions, and to not repeat them in the future.

7208733 Woops, a little typo over there. :twilightsheepish: Thanks for pointing it out! :twilightsmile:

Damn entertaining, loved that ending!

Oh dear ... That's either very neglectful or cruel of Twilight.

Haha popcorn. -listen to song popcorn -

Dear Sunburst,
Please take one thousand bits for bail money to the Crystal City Prison and go to Cell 14. I think you'll like what you find there.
Your Future Friend,
Twilight Sparkle

And then everyone froze to death because Starlight wasn't there to go get Sunburst and help fix the Heart.

Twilight just doomed the Crystal Empire and all of Equestria. 😂

SHE LEFT HER IN JAIL!!!!??? :pinkiegasp: Oh. My. Gosh!!! Twilight is SOOOOOO going to get it later!!!!!
:twilightoops:

Or.........maybe Starlight will hug her and tell her she totally had it coming.........🤔
*ten minutes of thinking later*
Yeah......nope. I forsee a very distastrous revenge on Twilight.


PLEASE DO ANOTHER CHAPTER OF THIS!!!!! :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

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