While at the Cafeteria, Bon-Bon spots a news student siting alone. Seeing that its an opportunity to gain a new friend, she decides to sit with her. What could possibly go wrong?
Knowing her luck, thing could get a little weird.
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Ha! Yes! Human Lyra is obsessed with ponies! This is all I ever dreamed!
PS- Please make a sequel very very soon.
Congrats for getting on the popular list! You totally deserve it
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Nice story.
You should make sequel or something.
May be "to come and go"?
Also why is it so important to inform us, that humans use tables in cafeterias?
"Table <...> other table <...> tables <...> table"
Dammit!
Same with "level" here
5496222 A sequel? Hmm...I'll think about it.
5496447 It did? *checks popular list* It did! Cool
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5497038 Sorry about that, I tend to babble about unimportant things
Human Lyra meeting pony Lyra. It has to happen.
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Why are you not a deer.
"Incidentally Bonbon, can you play half a piano while rubbing your face against mine?"
"Can I? I thought you'd never ask."
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"Hello Lyra, my name is Sunset Shimmer, ex-unicorn."
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5497409 Give me time...
I think you either meant 'sit' or 'seat herself'. The former's less awkward, however.
Reads as awkward. I'd add a 'that' where I've got the emboldened dashes.
You meant 'their' rather than 'there'. The former is a possessive, the other a location.
...I'm sorry, I can only point out so much grammatical stuff. You might want to read this over and correct odd bits here and there. Beyond that, I'm very pleased with this story - I've got it in my mind that Human!Lyra is every bit as fascinated with ponies as Pony!Lyra is humans. Wouldn't complain about a future story, particularly if it involves mention of Bon Bon's canon name.
5502311 Thanks for pointing those out, I'll just go and fix it.
Well it isn´t a bad one shot, but it is not enough to make me statisfied. I only like very few one-shots that much, but i guess there isn´t enough for me in the story.
Yeah....but i can´t say it would be bad, just funny and very short.
So wait, if pony Lyra wants to become human, then does human Lyra want to become a pony?
5600505 Maybe she'll find the portal.
5600530 maybe..........who knows what will happen when she does!
5600543 We could only imagine what would happen when she meets pony Lyra.
Oh Mon Dieu, Lyra is so damned coote XD.
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