With no other ideas, and unwilling to steal Seaquestria's Orb, Twilight Sparkle is left to wonder what could have been and where it all went wrong.
But when Queen Novo returns, seemingly having changed her mind, and offers to give the Orb to Twilight and her friends, her hope is born anew. What happens next nopony saw coming.
The Last Equestrian Princess, and the Queen of the Seaponies. United in a way never seen before, and nothing will stand in their way. Not an army, not the Storm King. And certainly not a broken horn unicorn.
Cover art is now done by this awesome possum.
Chapters (2)
Yosha!
Novo and Twilight. Guess that makes them Novight?
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Probably. I haven't thought of a name for them.
potara fusion or fusion metamorphosis = dragon ball z / super but what the hell?
you have my attention.
Would fusions count as transformations anyways? :3
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Probably. Doesn't really matter I feel.
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Fine by me.
Interesting Fusion. You have my attention.
Well this is definitely of to an interesting start.
I DON'T think Celestia/Luna, Cadence/Shining Armor, nor the entirety of Equestria will "like" Queen Novo's threatening attitude to Twilight, Spike, and their Friends. They are Famous Heroes, and Twilight is a Royal Princess for Pete's sake.
And I doubt that Novo wants to face the wrath from the likes of Celestia, Luna, Cadence, Shining Armor, Starlight Glimmer, the Mane Six's Parents, and even Discord himself ( Because poor Fluttershy is technically threatened as well.
) when they catch wind of this.
Plus, Novo is a bit rude that she cares about a measly spa, when the Ponies are still FRICKIN enslaved!!!!!!!!! And Celestia ( Her "Friend" ) is still trapped in stone.
I highly doubt that! You have go though Piss Off Celestia, Luna, Cadence, Shining Armor, and Starlight first!
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Maybe she'd be called Tivo.
*Sees the entirety of Season 9*
Yeah, he can't be that stupid enough to put Equestria in danger a fourth time. ( The first two is when he was still bad, the third is with Tirek, and the last one is the worst one in the end!!!! )
*While being sarcastic*
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So true. But that's not even remotely a thing yet.
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Well in this story, yes. Hopefully, the powerful fusion and the mentioning of the "Traitors must die" law. Those factors could convince Discord to NOT do something stupid this time.
And as i said, I can understand why you are not a fan of her, She Does a major level of damage to the whole kingdom and she gets away with it, sure she blocks an attack for the heroes but without her i don't know if the stormking would have made it this far
The sad thing Tempest was the only creditable threat what wasn't op in some way. How she won in the movie was tactics. She was the batman of the villians
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Well if you any ideas for how that could be rewritten, I could rewrite it. I see what you mean though.
As for Tempest... Yeah I see what you mean. I don't mind the nitpicking. A lot of this was set in stone when I started this story though. I'm not even sure why I went with a dragon and not an Ursa. But I did 😊.
I don't know if this is Twilight getting into that negative mindset that she did in the movie, or if you're actually making this argument. First of all, Twilight and the others wouldn't have been able to save Equestria in the first place if Discord didn't give Twilight that pendant as a sign of friendship. I'm pretty sure that wouldn't have become a key if that friendship wasn't legitimate. Secondly, the reason Discord fell for Tireks lies is for a very similar reason why Tempest fell for the Storm King's lies. In Discord's case, it was an offer of FRIENDSHIP. The reason he fell for Tirek's lies is because he values friendship. So by saying that Discord was stupid enough to fall for his lies is the same as saying friendship makes you stupid. Thirdly, Spike and Big Mac are his friends for game nights. Finally, the Season 6 Finale and Season 7 Premier (before the movie) shows that he does have friends.
The last Grand Galloping Gala is also proof that he's still learning about friendship. And let's not forget that the reason Celestia invited him was to cause chaos to make things exciting. Just like how that's why she invited the Mane 6 in The Best Night Ever. Trollestia isn't just a meme. It's a fact that Celestia is a Troll.
And I'm choosing to opt-out of using What About Discord as evidence.
The proper answer is yes. Everything Tempest is guilty of came from the Storm King's orders. And that's not counting his crimes prior to Tempest.
In fact, I made a comment on the previous chapter about how Novo should be the one to view Tempest as treasonous. But the thing is that the Hippogriffs ran from the Storm King long before Tempest was even allied with him. Even if you claim that she got knowledge of Tempest from Twilight's mind, Twilight didn't know that her original name was Fizzlepop Berrytwist. I did my research, even taking the movie's prequel comics into account. And When it was shown what Silverstream's fear was (the return of the Storm King), Tempest Shadow wasn't even mentioned in that fear. So I don't even need the comics to find evidence against Novo having an issue against Tempest. And for that same reason, Tempest wouldn't have known about the Hippogriffs.
First of all, what evidence is there that it suffered? Secondly, other than maybe Discord, what evidence than any villains were "let go"? And I'm being generous in giving you Discord. Because the only example for him was before he actually truly turned good. And by that, I don't mean he was evil, I mean he would fall under Chaotic Neutral. Anything after that can be applied to making mistakes. Do you know who else makes mistakes? Everyone in the show. The only villains who didn't deserve to be let go weren't let go. Sombra was destroyed (mostly), Tirek escaped from Tartarus and was locked back up in Tartarus, Chrysalis was constantly hiding from everyone, and Cozy Glow was locked up in Tartarus with her penpal. Everyone else either repented, weren't actually villains, or weren't dangerous enough to be taken note of.
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It was Twilight getting into her Movie mindset in that part. But since she properly tried to steal the Orb, the girls couldn't fight back on it. And I agree with what you said about Discord.
My only defense is that this is an Alternate Universe. So things would not always line up with what we have from Hasbro.
The show suffering is more a personal opinion. Take it with a grain of salt.
I'm not sure if you like the story now or not. Or this is just, as you said in a previous comment, the obsessive part of your mind pointing all of this out. I can't make everyone happy with what I write. So I won't take it badly.
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Actually, the second and third times were when he was neutral. As for Season 9, he was good, he just made a catastrophic mistake. And not only was he severely reprimanded, afterward, he was put on a severely tight leash.
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It's hard to say. But the Storm King cause a significant amount of damage even before he met Tempest. So if anything, Tempest just made him unstoppable. In fact, if the Storm King hadn't have manipulated Tempest the way he did, she never would've been a villain in the first place.
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I'd even place Batman a little higher since he actually trained and learned several forms of martial arts to become what he is. Any physical prowess that she has comes from being on her own for as long as she was. And she wouldn't even be a villain in the first place if it weren't for the Storm King.
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I'll certainly grant it for an AU. The moment Twilight and Novo fused made that quite clear.
And don't get me wrong. I'm still enjoying the story, regardless of how I may have some issues. Personally, I believe that a "100% satisfaction guarantee" concept is a myth. Because everyone has different preferences, and it's impossible to please everyone. And those who are pleased will still find some fault in some way. If I were to lowball it, I'd estimate that I'm about 95% satisfied so far. So don't worry. I'm not one of those people who see one fault and claim the entire story is ruined because of it. That's actually a pet peeve of mine. In some cases, I may be tolerant to a fault. Not many people would probably say that they like Dragonball Evolution after all.
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Point there but lime I said unlike the other villians she is not op in some way
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I agree. In fact, I didn't even realize how not OP she was until you pointed that out. But even someone who's not OP can outclass someone who is OP. For example, If there was a battle between Batman and Iron Man, and I were to bet on who would win, I'd put my money on Batman. I'm sure Batman has something in his utility belt that he could use to deactivate Iron Man's super suit. And without the suit, Batman wins hands down. And it's simply because of the fact that Iron Man's powers are the super suit, whereas Batman's powers are Bruce Wayne.
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True he might just have wait a Bit longer without her to get his numbers truly overwhelming and Just gone for drowning them in soldiers
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When I meant the "second", I meant his introduction in the Second Season Premiere. And the third mistake is still with Tirek. But, I guess you meant that he was still Chaotic Neutral in both situations?
As for Season 9, he did fudge up bad!!! And while he did get a ear full. I DIDN'T see him get a "severe tight leash"???!!! When was that?!
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Yeah Batman plans for everything before hand. Iron man is more on the fly
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Or, you know. Just send Grubber to them. He'd be able to annoy them all into submission. Maybe that's why the Storm King was so successful, and why Grubber was part of the crew. In fact, I'll bet that the Hippogriffs didn't run to hide from the Storm King, I'll bet that they ran to get away from Grubber.
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I assume the third was the Season 4 Finale. 1000 years ago and Season 2 Premier, he's Chaotic Evil. From when Fluttershy reforms him until the Season 4 Finale, he's Chaotic Neutral. After Season 4, he's Chaotic Good.
You wouldn't have seen him being restricted unless you read the Season 10 Comics. But they are being very strict. No matter how mundate the spell could be, they aren't letting Discord do it without permission. And they are being scrict with permission. When Fluttershy tells you "no" unwaveringly as she is, you know you fucked up.
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Yeah, you got that right!
Dang!!!??? I have to check out some of the Season 10 Comics one of these days. The only thing I know about them, is that arc with Zecora having Zebra Friends.
And that Zebrica got their own "Tree of Harmony" for some weird frickin reason???!!!!!
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It has something to do with the Elements of Harmony being available to potentially everyone, not just the Mane 6. And not to give too much away, but there are 4 more to be discovered. You can probably see what the pattern of Season 10 will be. Also, one of the comics shows the moment when Pinkie Pie and Cheese Sandwich actually realize that they have feelings for each other. And to be honest, it's kinda cute.
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So multiple Trees of Harmony from each different continents ( exclude Equestria, since they have the original. ), belong to many different Non-Pony Races/Species. Their own versions of the Pillars/Mane Six/Young Six.
It is very nice. Having equality for everyone. And it's not just exclusive for the Ponies to be the "only" Elements of Harmony.
Novo means rules seaquestria, and Twilight is the end of a day, so perhaps the name 'queen seaglow' would be fitting?
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Could work. I've got two different endings in mind for this story. Will hold onto this for one of them.
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Two endings?
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me want more story ... great read ... great job
its time for a new chapter I'm going
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Well write me a good Battle for Canterlot, and I'll be happy to. Taking back Canterlot is the major hold up on the next chapter.
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oi i don't write i only read no more no less
Will this be finished?
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Eventually 😔.