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Italibaso


Hi, everpony. I'm a dutch brony who tries his best to write good stories just for fun

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A few days have passed since the defeat of the Storm King. And to celebrate the occasion, Queen Novo invites Twilight Sparkle, her friends and the princesses to a party at their kingdom on Mount Aris. Despite Twilight's hesitation, she agrees to come along after hearing some encouraging words from her friends.

After arriving at Mount Aris however, they quickly learn that Queen Novo's daughter, Princess Skystar, has gone missing. Twilight promises Queen Novo that she, the princesses and the rest of her friends will find Princess Skystar at all cost, but they'll slowly discover that something far bigger might be at stake.

(This story will mostly take place in the movie's universe, but will also include some things from the show as well)

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''Well, it's like my mother used to tell me,'' Queen Novo said, ''A queen is always given a great power. And with that great power, comes great responsibility.'' She explained in a very regal voice.

Nice references to Spider-Man

Wonder what will happen next?

''I see how this is,'' Queen Novo said, talking with a more serious tone in her voice, ''You and him are just like the ones I've heard about, greedy souls who want to use the pearl's power for themselves!''

Novo, you idiot! :facehoof:

Didn't you listen to Callidus's plea? He is the victim, NOT a bad guy like the Storm King/Tempest Shadow! Didn't he just say that he was attacked too??

''There are alicorn princesses who live in a city called Canterlot,'' Tempest explained, ''They hold more power than any creature in the world. If we can absorb their magic into your staff, you'll be unstoppable.''

''Ooohhh, I like the sound of that,'' The Storm King said while looking intrigued, ''Very well. If you capture these princesses for me and give me their magic for my staff, then I'll fix that little horn of yours.''

Am I the only one that finds it weird that if Tempest does know about the princesses the whole time? Then why the heck didn't she just take a trip to Canterlot, and plead with the nice princesses to fix/repair her horn as a kid? Or even go to a hospital and get a horn prosthetic or something?


Instead of you know, joining with a egotistical, warmongering tyrant like the Storm King that will obviously NOT keep his end of a bargain if he has his own way??!! :facehoof:


This sounds like a major plothole to the original movie. And I hope that this might be addressed here, just so that Tempest realize that she was actually very stupid back there on not going to the princesses first?

''I can't believe I was foolish enough to trust that traitorous bird,'' Queen Novo responded, ''I let you all down.''

''Don't blame yourself,'' Sky Beak said, ''None of us could have known what he was up to.''

''I guess that's true.'' Queen Novo said. She looked down at the pearl in her fins, watching it shine underwater. She couldn't help but ponder about what just happend, how one naive act of kindness could have led to such a disaster.

Your are all still morons for over a simple misunderstanding. I hope that you feel like a total moron, and feel regret when you learn the actual truth from the "reformed" Tempest or even Capper. And then, you owe Callidus a huge apology, Novo!

''Yeah,'' Queen Novo responded, still clearly lost in thought, ''I guess you can never know who to trust, besides your own kind.''

That's just racist/xenophobic. And I want to punch you in the face!! :flutterrage:

When you realize the truth. Your are gonna drown with much guilt and remorse by now.

''I KNOW!'' Queen Novo shouted before he could finish, ''But it's the only way to keep everyone and the pearl safe from the outside world. From now on, we must only look out for ourselves.''

You gonna regret it, once our heroic ponies show up later.


And then there will be tons of apologies! From Twilight and her friends, then Twilight apologies to you. Then a total apology from Tempest Shadow, and you especially will apologize to poor Callidus.


Edit: Three dislikes? Why!?

''Defend our kingdom at all cost!'' Queen Novo commanded to all the hippogiff guards.

Hippogriff

If you need to borrow an OC, for either side, let me know.

''There are alicorn princesses who live in a city called Canterlot,'' Tempest explained, ''They hold more power than any creature in the world. If we can absorb their magic into your staff, you'll be unstoppable.''

Oh no this is when the movie begins and not only that it's the Friendship Festival

''I guess that's true.'' Queen Novo said. She looked down at the pearl in her fins, watching it shine underwater. She couldn't help but ponder about what just happend, how one naive act of kindness could have led to such a disaster.

I don't think that's not his fault he didn't even know he was followed

''I KNOW!'' Queen Novo shouted before he could finish, ''But it's the only way to keep everyone and the pearl safe from the outside world. From now on, we must only look out for ourselves.''

I guess that's what happens when she had trust issues when Twilight and the others try to ask for her help but I guess she doesn't trust anybody then again it didn't help that Twilight and I know this is a mixed feelings for me about this whole situation stealing the pearl out of desperation but Queen Novo should have helped but anyway like I said it was a mixed situation for me

So basically it was an origin of Queen Novo and how everything all started when the Storm King invaded her home and had to force into hiding but the thing is she blame herself for trusting somebody but he didn't do nothing wrong but I guess the anger got the best of her and that's why she never trusted anybody out there kind of sad to think about it so far this is a pretty interesting starts of a story can't wait to see how this will go

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And just found the Novo-Neighsayer

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Don't blame me on hating Novo on falsely blaming a victim ( Callidus ) to the Storm King's rampage.

Are you still continuing with your story?

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Yes I am, it just takes awhile that's all. My next chapter should be ready soon.

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Oh okay is it kind of like the same situation I had

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Not really. I've just been working on the next two chapters at the same time, so that I hopefully can get the next two out faster

''I'm sorry that I wasn't able to help you when Canterlot was being invaded by the Storm King.'' Celestia answered, looking guilty while her eyes were looking to her side.

Liked the bit showing Celestia was affected by her loss there.
Feels like Luna deep down would be handling the lost worse honestly.

Twililght looked next to her and saw Spike standing close to the bed with a wooden bucket in his claws.

Twilight

Suddenly Twilight felt a big splash of water hitting her face. Her eyes and mouth opened wide, but instead of water, her lungs were met with fresh air. Twilight quickly catched her breath, having no longer a muzzle around her mouth for some reason, and looked at her surroundings. Much to her surprise, the environment around her had completely changed. All the water around her was gone, the place was completely lit and the cave suddenly seemed to be made out of crystal instead of rocks. Something soft was pressing against her backside. Twilight looked down to see a white mattress under her. It was eventually clear to her that she was back home inside her castle.

That kind of reminds me of when Ed had a nightmare and Eddy through a water at him

''Well, last time we were there, Queen Novo and I didn't exactly end on good terms with each other,'' Twilight explained, ''So she probably won't be very happy to see me again.''

Okay basically there was no win scenario Queen Novo was pretty unreasonable not only that refusing to help out but it didn't help that twilight try to steal the Pearl with that is a big no no so again it's in the between

Spike hugged Twilight back for a few seconds before letting go, ''Hehe, I guess you could say I'm one of a KIND. Get it? Because it's the same word, but with a different meaning.........that was a bad joke.''

Lol I get it 🤣

''Well, it's true,'' Rainbow Dash responded with a shrug, ''Remember how she reacted when she couldn't write a friendship letter to Princess Celestia on time?''

Oh yeah I remember that that was like the ultimate twilighting of all time good times lol

''Wow wow, Twilight. Cool your jets.'' Rainbow Dash said.

Do you mean whoa or wow

''And this time we'll make sure to bring some royal guards along,'' Luna added, ''Turns out that giving them all a vacation during the Friendship Festival a few days ago wasn't exactly a good idea.''

Well at least that makes sense why the guards were not there during the invasion

''So in short: Captain Celaeno and her crew are off doing pirate stuff, Capper went back to Klugetown to be a magician, the Storm King's guards left to pony-knows-where, and Fizzlepop Berrytwist went on a journey of self discovery.'' Spike explained.

Well at least we know what happened to them I really wish we could see them again but you know because the actors and the actresses who played them are way too big for a TV show and if they did bring them back it's not the same voice so they just only mentioned only although they did make the small appearances they just did not talk

''Is that you, Princess?!'' A voice coming from the entrance shouted in an urgent manner, ''It's me, Sky Beak!''

Gasp oh that's silverstream father I forgot he was one of the royal guards of Queen Novo

''Oh, thank you,'' Queen Novo said with a relieved smile, ''I can't believe I ever used to think that you ponies were untrustworthy.''

The last sentence from Queen Novo caused Twilight to have a slightly worried look on her face.

''Wait a minute, untrustworthy? What do you mean by that?'' Celestia asked with a surprised look on her face.

Queen Novo glanced over at Twilight for a few seconds,

Way to open Old Wounds but then again it's only been a few days so

Well then what a way to start the celebration but anyway it looks like Twilight is having some doubts about seeing Queen Novo after the last time they were there again that situation was a mix but her friends wants to be sure her that everything will be okay that they got her back but it looks like they're having a freedom celebration just like silverstream talk about it but when they got things got really hectic and it looks like princess skystar is missing and they have no idea where she is and it looks like they're going to see if they can ask fizzlepop and maybe she can be in that location where Capper lives the only question is what happened to princess skystar has she been kidnapped or did she ran away I guess we'll find out next time

yep I'm back to this again 😁

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Heh, I didn't even know about that scene XD

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I meant whoa, yeah. Sorry, my English is not always good XD

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And I'm okay with that :)

The movie is canon to the show.

Awesome job, can't wait for the next chapter.

Curious on how it goes.
Especially with it turns out someone is trying to get 6 creatures to turn to stone.
(I hope Spike doesn't get captured)


Loved that Spike went out there with Tempest to find Twilight

''Okay.'' Fluttershy said, having a slight look of disappointment on her face.

I'm so sorry Fluttershy I know you must hate seeing them like that but we have a mission to go don't worry I'm sure we'll figure out to Free them

''Wow, no kidding. They can't even get our noses right.'' Pinkie Pie said after taking a look at the wanted poster herself.

Do you know how finn Ryder felt lol

''Why are we even wanted? We just got here.'' Rainbow asked.

Well actually rainbow we kinda created a mess when we try to escape from the storm King's Army

but it was hardly their fault because they're try to escape from those who tried to sell them and tried to capture them

The creatures were about to gang up on the six little ponies and their purple dragon, when suddenly a tall cat jumped down from above, landing between the horde of creatures and the six ponies. He wore a red coat, a long black cape and a tall black hat with a purple feather on it.

Heck yeah it's capper

''I haven't seen those guys since I left Canterlot,'' Tempest answered, ''But my guess is that they've returned to the Storm King's Castle.''

But wait a minute what about Grubber where did he go?

Before Capper could respond, the cloaked figure pulled a metal pipe from under his cloak and hit the tall cat on the head. Stars circled around Capper's head before falling down on the wooden ground. The cloaked figure showed a sinister smile on his grey beak that was sticking out of his hood and picked up the body.

Gasp noooo wait a minute could he be the one who kidnapped Princess skystar and something tells me he's kidnapping the ones who got involved of the advance of My Little Pony movie oh no

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Don't worry, I haven't forgotten about him. You'll see what I mean next time ;)

Ohh boy this is really not good at all so it looks like Twilight and her friend finally made it to Klugetown and once again it see Better Days but it looks like things got worse because now Twilight and her friends are wanted in this town because of that sneaky mole and now they chasing them but it looks like capper came just in time to save them once they made it to the tunnel it looks like somebody was in there are as well and apparently knocked out Twilight by a mysterious creature but once they finally made it there they finally found fizzlepop and unfortunately Twilight is missing So fizzlepop and Spike going to find her while that was happening Capper kind of tell them about the situation and about their mayor who disappeared and betrayed the town meanwhile Twilight found herself found a mysterious creature but he doesn't want to hurt her but to give her some information but before he could Spike and fizzlepop found her and now he disappeared because apparently he knows the information what happened to princess skystar but once they finally made it to capper's house she told them about the storm King's soldiers were at the castle and they're about to go there and fizzlepop join the group which that awesome I wonder if they're going to find Captain Celaeno but back at capper's house it looks like he got a visitor but not a friendly one and he knocked them out and apparently kidnapped him who is that mysterious character and why is he doing this and is he behind the missing of princess skystar well I guess we'll find out next time

Bout time someone talked some sense into that stupid Hedgehog. Seriously, even Sonic isn't that stupid. :twilightoops:Whoops. :twilightblush: wrong story.

''I know that feeling all too well, sister,'' Luna said in a calm and understanding manner, ''And I know how tempting it can be, but you must NEVER give in. Do not let what happened to me all those years ago happen to you.''

Ohh you mean like daybreaker yikes 😬

''You shouldný think like that,'' Luna explained, ''Princess or not, Twilight and her friends have taught me that there's nothing wrong with asking for help from other ponies.''

shouldn't

''I was NOT expecting that from her.'' Tempest whispered as she and the others reached the other side of the airship.

Trust me when we see her out of character ( in the good way depending how you look at it ) she can really surprised us

''Who cares?! Once we find Skystar and visit Capper one more time, there's no need for us to go back to that place anyway!'' Rainbow Dash explained.

If Only They knew about what happened to Capper

''Trust me, that's nothing compared to some of the other things we've seen her do.'' Rainbow Dash said to Tempest when noticing the look on the purple unicorn's face.

She's not wrong I see stranger things before

''Hey! I know you.'' The maskless storm creature who was looking at the yellow pegasus said. The rest of the storm guards all turned their attention to Fluttershy as well.

Hey it's that creature that Fluttershy talk to during the battle in Canterlot nice

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