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During Rainbow Dash's first interaction with her friends' Pony Pet Play-Date, she was determined to get herself a pet. However, the way she went about getting one didn't sit well with one particular pony. Having had enough of the Pegasus and her lack of compassion, Twilight Sparkle makes both a brave and stupid challenge that leaves Dash and the rest of her friends wondering if she had gone insane. However, Twilight was determined to teach Dash a lesson, even if it meant getting humiliated. What fate had in store for the unicorn and Pegasus was not what anypony had expected, especially Twilight and Rainbow themselves.

Chapters (6)
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Comments ( 342 )

I'm generous today and love tiw-dash fics.. 5/5

OH JEEZ This can only end one way. :trollestia:

Perfectly. :twilightblush:

Another good fic I must say,
You seem to do good writing this way.
I love your works, keep it up,
And don't let the outside world corrupt...
:yay:

That was great! I can't wait for this to kick into gear. Twilight being humiliated, TwiDash shipping, and finally, after a long few chapters of romance, a hot. . . steamy. . . session of. . . . . . . . . . . . . . PARTYING to celebrate Tank being chosen as Rainbow's pet and Twi' and Rainbow dating! :trollestia: <(Gotcha!)

I do want to complain about one thing though. It was sort of off-putting when you put in lines from the show. . . because when you did a lot of the time the quotes were wrong. I mean, if you're going to quote it, quote it. I'm not sure why you threw in extra words and changed things. Not a big deal, but it bothered me. :unsuresweetie:

I'm really hoping to see more of this soon, it's a great idea and you're doing a great job with it so far! :twilightsmile:

Wow. The add beneath this story is an advertisement for buying pet tortoises. No lie!:rainbowlaugh:

Twidash is best pairing.

Well written Twidash with an unusual starting point is even better!

Eager to see more.

hmm not bad this is going to be good

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:rainbowlaugh: Awesome! This can only end in WIN! :twilightblush::rainbowwild:

Is this going to be a full, TwiDash? Only the future can tell, but in the meantime I'll be laughing all the way. :pinkiehappy:

*Is Tracking*

Haaaaaah! Yes! :rainbowlaugh: :twilightangry2:

All's well that ends well. I'm looking forward to seeing the rest of this crazy affair. Let the games begin! :pinkiehappy:

I almost feel bad for Twilight here. Almost. :scootangel:
This looks like it's going to be absolutely hilarious, and I hope there's more coming soon.

have a mature scene at the end itd be the perfect ending :rainbowlaugh: jk do what u want with the end :pinkiesmile:

Loving this so far :twilightsmile:

lols Twilight roll over.good story cant wait for more.:pinkiehappy:

fuck you rarity----->:raritycry:

Really liking this story so far, well, really I like any TwiDash. :rainbowkiss:

I must say there is a fine difference between the word PET and pet. One could be use in a sexual manner and the other can be used in a compainion manner. I must say this is some idea for a storyline. I approve and wish to give you the best of luck upon such a great idea like this one. :rainbowkiss:

...Oh dear Celestia.
This will not end well.

...Except for us laughing readers! :derpytongue2::pinkiehappy::rainbowlaugh::trollestia:

at first I was like :rainbowhuh: then I was like :trixieshiftright: and finaly I was like :twilightsmile:

This will be fun. This will be a lot of fun.

:rainbowlaugh:LOL this is hillarious. Can't wait for next Chappie

80148 Well, it's a matter of things not being 100% the same, while not being 100% different. Let me explain. What is written in stone or already created is basically what is true. But, if even ONE thing is different...if one thought is different...if one action is different...it changes EVERYTHING. It's like the butterfly effect. What we saw on the show was basically...well, it was basically the episode itself. But, Twilight's thinking was changed, so...even if it's as simple as something like that, it'd enough to change the flow of how events work. That and...it's impossible to match things word-for-word. I wanted to make it SOMEWHAT similar to the show's episode, but I didn't want to make it completely different or completely the same, either.

JAG

Thank you, good sir, for writing this. I've been hoping for weeks that somepony would write a story like this, and lo and behold, here it is. Good TwiDash fics hardly ever come along (it's been months since I've found any I've liked), and it's usually depressing or serious when it does. So here we have not only well-written and comedic TwiDash, but it's an original concept and based on one of my favorite episodes. All of this combines to equal the following: :yay:

Ya done made my day. Keep writing, and I'll keep reading.

lol spent nearly the whole time reading laughing myself silly, cannot wait to see the rest

Used my pic for the cover i see :twilightsmile: Will be tracking this :)

80759 Oh my, it's you! I didn't realize you were on here, too...or maybe I did and forgot about it. Well, um...just so I'm clear, you don't MIND that I used your picture, do you? It's just...well, the perfect picture. I was gonna use yours or the one that's posted three comments above mine. But...yeah, I picked yours. :twilightblush:

Sure go ahead im pleased that ppl use my pics for twidash fic covers :yay:

Great story so far, can't wait to see where this goes.

This story is excellent and I can't wait for the next chapter.

You better do a good work on this story or I WILL SWALLOW YOUR SOUL! :twilightangry2:

:twilightsmile: till next time keep up the awesomeness rolling

I actually think it'll be Tortoise\Twilight shipping! Why not? Bonding because of all that challenges, and turning to each other when Dash mocks them, they finally find love and appreciation in each other, living Dash alone with her 'perfect pet'.

Hahahaha, I love where this is going! I can't wait to read more :twilightsmile:

Haha, I'm hoping this is a TwiDash, there awesome.
I'm looking forward to next chapter :twilightsmile:

Is it weird that I wouldn't mind being RD's pet :rainbowderp:

:ppmoar:81195 Sigh. Well that was meant to me an emotion thing. What I was tryanna say is me gusta. I WANT MORE.

Ok, this can go either really well or really badly. I'm hoping it goes well.

80823

Agreed; that last long sentence needs some work.
Also, you may wish to avoid using "gonna" unless you're going for a casual tone (personally, I find it jarring unless it's used in speech).

Well done.

80643 I figured it was something along those lines. It's good that you're making the story your own, and not the show's. Don't worry about silly ol' me, just because I would do it one way doesn't mean your way's any worse. Believe me, I've been proven wrong on my suggestions plenty of times, so I'm not trying to be some sort of almighty critic whose always right. :twilightsmile:

81172 Implying that somepony would mind :trixieshiftright:?!. . . OK, yeah somepony probably would mind, but hell, I'd be down if I got the chance. :rainbowwild:
80689 <----- That could be us, Zooty :fluttercry:. But unfortunately, it's not. I will go and cry now.

The most hilarious yet developmental story would be the one where Twilight wins the race(and maybe drags Tank along). She has magic after all, but even better would be how that would be both incredibly awkward for everyone involved, it would mess with RD too :D

5/5 and tracking. Awesome story.

I liked it. The way you wrote Dash was a little obnoxious, but she WAS being obnoxious that day, so i can't hold it against you. <_<

I'm not the biggest Twi-Dash fan... but I have to admit this is gonna be a great story.:pinkiehappy:

TwiDash is the best paring (as I always say) and I like the ones that build up to the point even better!

this is rather different, but I can see this is going to be good, And wit ha new Idea to read it makes my day even better!

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