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"So where are you going?"
"With you."
It's a phrase Rainbow Dash has heard nearly every day of her life. Wherever she roams, Fluttershy is sure to be trailing behind. The quiet, fearful girl running along after the one who never seemed to know fear. It hadn't changed in all their years, despite everything they'd seen and done.
The thought that it might change was a little too frightening to think about.
Featured, 05/28/2021. I raise my glass to you.
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I did not see this coming
Imma have to hit ya with a big fat 'loved it.'
I think this was great. very touching, and I loved the ending.
The fuck you mean "nothin special"!? This was great.
Well, a part of me is sad that they won't be attending college together, but at least they'll be waiting for each other. Nice job.
This was cute, I enjoyed it a lot.
One thing I quite liked about this was that it actually doesn't rely too heavily on us knowing the ponies. Like yes I'm probably more emotionally invested in this due to who they're representing, but even if you were to take that out and just have it as 2 completely different girls there's enough character development there for me to care about their relationship and its development. Very enjoyable read.
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I know, right? Like, who knew I could write an 'E' rated story.
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It is cliché and not super original, honestly. Maybe not in execution, but definitely in result.
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I considered this more logical and less corny. Besides, everything Rainbow said is more or less true.
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I just want to write something anyone can enjoy.
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I meant the fact you did a common shipping like FlutterDash for once. That took me by surprise
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That, too. Gotta shake it up.
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Lol yes
Daawwww! This is very sweet.
DawwwX the cuteness in this is overwhelming, a lovely little story between these two. Nice one
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By any chance, do you intend to write a sequel where they are reunited?
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No, I don't. I feel like I left it inevitable enough that a sequel would be redundant.
But I'm grateful that you'd like one! Enough noise for one and I'm always willing to reconsider.
The thing is, it's hard to come up with wholly original, entertaining ideas. It's a pretty saturated market, after all.
The 9-12 sections were a bit of a chore for me, because I felt like the narration was too sophisticated for kids that small, but the rest of it was splendid.
The ending is my favorite part. Homecoming/prom stories are always fun because they have such a whimsical atmosphere, and they're set in such emotional periods in characters' lives, that there's a lot of potential for those emotions to spill out, in both fluff and angst. And I think you balanced them well here.
I also appreciate the decision to have them be long-distance. It safely avoids being cliché or contrived.
Oh. My. God
So much I want to say here. That was so good especially for how short it was. You packed sooooo much emotion into every word.
The start of it was possibly the best. I knew exactly what was going to happen but I felt legitimate dread of what they might do to poor little minishy I genuinely worried what might happen to proto Angel Bunny, if we'd have to deal with how Fluttershy would deal with him getting hurt. Rainbows arrival was perfect. I've said it before, the Fandom does ponies better then the original creators do. We've seen that scene in the show, you made it hit so much harder.
The first instance set the pace so well and did so much to establish the nature of their relationship.
The third was the best. You slipped it in so perfectly and it really did show their relationship growing.
Fluttershy finally getting to help Rainbow, and especially given what she was helping her with, and not it not being a sudden relationship set up was also perfect.
And finally the turn. The last mention, and the whole set up for it. I was right there with Shy, I thought you had hidden where their relationship had gone and she really did have that special gift for her.
So great. Easy decision : liked, faved, followed.
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Oh right, I already follow you
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Fair enough. But will we at least see another FlutterDash story where the two *ahem*
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I mean, it's not blatantly spelled out here, but...
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Well, I meant more in a romantic setting.
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Then no guarantees. Crack-shipping is sort of my thing, this was just an idea I couldn't shake.
I really, really like this one. Good work