Starlight is good with magic, but she’s no scholar—not like Sunburst. One of her best friends and arguably the smartest, cleverest, most prepared pony she knows. Who grew up with books in the same way she grew up with magic running in her veins.
The world is enjoying a new era of peace, but there’s still so much to do—new things to learn and try. Starlight thinks that there’s no harm in reading some of Sunburst’s books—to learn about the world in other ways instead of simply living in it.
Reading the books he recommends turns into an interest for poetry, for she can’t help but feel moved by the ancient Equestrian sonnets. Her unexpected interest in the genre makes her try her hoof in writing some. And no, they’re not very good, but they are sincere if nothing else.
And she would never, ever show Sunburst her poetry. Not when most of them are about him.
Now with a review from mushroompone from the Fillydelphia Oracle!
This is beautiful. Take my upvote and keep going, Fool!
Very nice start.
A really good start. I'm looking forwards to seeing where this will go!
Pretty great start
A well written start.
10604307
I was feeling oddly poetic when I wrote this, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
10604333
Hopefully, the next part follows the same pattern!
10604585
Let's enjoy the ride together.
10604646
A nice start to a simple story of two dummies falling in love😌
10604747
Thanks man! Stick around for more!
I take it you don't normally write in present tense, given the note you left at the end. Well, it read well, and I look forward to more StarBurst cheesiness. We all know there needs to be more of that in the world.
Good chapter.
10609305
You mean, "Exellent chapter."
Beautiful
As a reserved, more introverted kind of person, this speaks to me right here.
The sweetest ending to give this
Magnificent...
That you don't usually write in present tense is noticeable but it's still pretty good.
This is a pretty nice story.
this was so cute!!
Damn straight. Trixie is a smart cookie 🍪
It’s not ridiculous. I like writing poems too. And like starlight I have nothing special or anything that I should be making poems by any means. But it is a nice outlet to all the stuff in my head and that’s all it needs to be
10613122
I feel you
I need more Starbust in my life.
11101676
me too bro
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Absolute cinema 🙌