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Just another dummy on the internet, with too much imagination and not enough time on their hands. Sometimes I write cohesive stuff...mostly StarBurst.


It's a huge step they're taking, and it's going to be hard, and long, and exhausting. But it's going to be worth it in the end, to form a family with him, to be a mother—is like all the pieces of her life are finally falling into place and she's exactly where she needs to be.

Or, Sunburst and Starlight take the plunge and decide to start a family, through adoption.

Edit: added a bit more context into the story to make a certain aspect more obvious.

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This was lovely! Never thought about Luster being adopted, I think its awesome.

Great job!

Great story, but I think I missed something. Why can’t Sunburst and Starlight conceive a baby again?

Thanks! I love the idea of her being their kid, blood-related or not.
I guess it's my fault for not making it more obvious, but to answer your question:

At first I thought Starlight didn't like the idea of being pregnant, given what Sunburst's mentioned and all, but that's an interesting curveball.

I don't know why the dislikes on your comment though.

(I know why, but I don't know "why", you get me? XD)


I don't know why the dislikes on your comment though.

You can headcanon any two ponies you like into a ship, and nopony will ever complain.

But if you headcanon a character to be trans, you'll get plenty of hate and downvotes. People will literally tell you that it's wrong to portray a fictional cartoon horse being transgender. They'll attack you loudly and forcefully and accuse you of ruining the show and the fandom.

Being trans myself, seeing it never surprises me. Anyway, have a trans horse. :twilightsmile:

You should submit this to trans and LGBT groups if it's relevant. (I'd do it myself but I've had some negative experiences with them so I generally let my readers add my stories to diversity groups for me.)

Thankfully the terfs and the transphobes are hiding behind the dislike button to be much of an issue :derpytongue2: and they can cry me a river for all I care.

But thanks for the comment (and the follow!) I'm going to edit this a little bit to make the point more clear before posting it in more relevant groups.


I guess it's my fault for not making it more obvious, but to answer your question:

Yeah, i doubt most readers would assume this from just reading your story. I also legit taught it is because Starlight Glimmer feels uncomfortable being pregnant. There is literally nothing in your text that suggests this.

You're right, added a bit more context into the story to hopefully make this point more obvious 👍

Really good story

He cannot say such sweet things and not expect her bones to become pudding

This made me giggle. I love it 👍

Cara #12 · 3 weeks ago · · ·


Sunburst is really high on my favorite ponies list and I've always seen him as trans, something about it just makes sense. I love seeing it just as a normal thing and it's not a surprise, it's just part of him. Everything about this, the easy dialogue, the goofy couple figuring things out as they go, trans Sunburst being so effortlessly slotted into the story, it's all just *chef's kiss*.

I'm vibrating right now holy crap I love this. Great job!!

thanks for the comment (and the follow!), I'm glad you enjoyed it!

These two are idiots and I love them :rainbowkiss:

I'm happy you like my portrayal of Sunburst, his being trans as something natural and part of him was exactly what I was aiming for. I didn't make such a big deal out of it because in this story, at this point in his life, those that know him are aware of it and accepted him a long time ago, and the story is not about that, is about a goofy couple starting a family.

And really just thank you thank you thank you! You have no idea how happy this comment makes me! derpicdn.net/img/2019/7/22/2098449/medium.gif

I absolutely adore this story and everything about it. The vibes are immaculate.

This is heartwarming to read, and the dialogue and characters feel completely natural. Well done.

“Sorry chipmunk cheeks, but I’m not sure if you noticed, but I love puns! It’s just how eye roll!”

Oh I get it lol 😆

This was a really cute read, loved Starlight and Sunburst's interactions with each other. Nice job.

Warm and fizzy, just the way I like my romance/family bonding stories!

The only thing that could've made even more perfect would've been to see Twilight's adorkable reaction to being an aunt again.

There are like two more puns hidden in there, did you catch them? :raritywink:

Aw, thanks man! I'm happy that you're happy :heart:

Warm and fuzzy is the name of the game, funny enough I wrote about her reaction in another StarBurst story, I would be pretty much the same reaction

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