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FoolAmongTheStars


Just another dummy on the internet, with too much imagination and not enough time on their hands. Sometimes I write cohesive stuff...mostly StarBurst.

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Starlight messed up big time.

She made a batch of love potion and Sunburst accidentally drank the whole thing! After Spike calms her down, he gently suggested that it might not be a bad thing, especially since Sunburst seems strangely unaffected.

What could his sudden tolerance to a potent love potion mean?

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Comments ( 19 )

Dawww, that was sweet. :twilightblush:

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I was going to say this, but I've been beaten to the punch! :trollestia:

The love potion smells acrid unless you are used to experiencing it, and the smell of love for Starlight smells like turpentine to her, oh no!

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I accept all the dawws I can get :pinkiehappy:

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It smells acrid to her because it's love directed at herself, which in part is a fail-safe from the potion so you don't accidentally ingest it and start making out with your reflection, and the other is that Starlight has some self-esteem issues and needs to be a little kinder to herself that's the way I thought about it anyways.

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A man of culture I see 😏

“It is an emergency, just…not the end-of-the-world-as-we-know-it kind of emergency, b-but still a big deal…!”

“…With you, everything is a big deal.”

“Spike, not helping,” Starlight rebuked and stepped closer to the receiver, panic seeping into her voice.”

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

Jokes aside, this was a cute Starburst story. The accidental love potion shenanigans was classic Starlight.

Its a very nice short story.

You often write such great StarBurst. This one totally lives up to your high standard.

And I could totally go for seeing that date...
Just saying :scootangel:

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Thanks! Filling this site with cute StarBurst is my ultimate goal :rainbowkiss:

🎵I took my troubles down to Madame Rue
You know that gypsy with the gold-capped tooth
She's got a pad down on Thirty-Fourth and Vine
Sellin' little bottles of Love Potion Number Nine🎵

Adorable, as always. A great way to brighten up my evening! And happy belated Starlight Glimmer day. Here's to another year of our favourite, neurotic dork. :pinkiecrazy:

Great ending. Still... he needs to see a poison specialist ASP or you going to have to write a squeal to this story.

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🎵But when I kissed that cop down at Thirty-Fourth and Vine
He broke my little bottle of Love Potion No. Nine🎵

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Thanks! Every day is Starlight Glimmer day for me anyways but I wanted to be in sync with the fandom for once 😅

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I'm pretty sure he's fine, maybe a bit of indigestion and migraine in the morning, but who knows, if people want to see more then we could see how he fares...

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You do a great job of it sir

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🎵I told her that I was a flop with chicks
I been this way since nineteen fifty six🎵

🎵She looked at my palm and she made a magic sign
She said "What you need is, Love Potion Number 9"🎵

Pretty cute, and the reason the potion "failed" makes sense, love potions are usually said to produce "false love" acting crazy being a side effect, surely true love trumps false love so really bringing love with the person the potion is trying to make you love means the effects and side effects are nullifyed.

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Most works of fiction I've read agree that there's no such thing as a true love potion. Since true, honest love that lasts a lifetime is too complicated for a simple potion to replicate perfectly.

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