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StormLuna


Princess Luna is the best princess and Nightmare Moon is the best queen.

Comments ( 27 )

(Sees cover art) Okay. Nice.

(Description) So far, so good.

(Tags) ...oh. Oh no. Oh no.

11178659

I put the tags there to warn people of everything that is in the story, things that may gross some people out.

It isn't really cheating if its her mom right?
The answer... Yes it is cheating, you're a cheater, and and from the tags a weird one.

11178679

The tags represent the crazy fetishes Twilight Velvet has.

11178660
props to u for being up front about it then... still not gonna read it tho

11178692

Well if you don't want to read it, that is your right. I put the tag up so people will know what they're getting into if they choose to read it.

11178683
ahh ok well Karma on him for cheating

You lost me with the watersports and blood.

For me blood, of any sort, makes it an immediate no-go.

11178751

I can understand that entirely. I'm the same way when it comes to shipping Spike....it is something that I simply have no desire to read.

awesome story mate keep it up cant wait for the next story:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

11178935

It may not be for a while because I am moving next week....that and I can't pump out stories as quickly as I used to be able to.

I read this out of curiosity. I'm giving this story an upvote because I think it was well-written. I hope you have some more wonderful story ideas in the future!

11179875

Thanks for the upvote and I'm glad you think it was well written. I am currently working on a BBW Fluttershy anthro x human story.

11197389

Thanks, I don't get a ton of compliments on my writing.

Now I made the mistake of taking a very quick glance of her tits, tits that were twice the size of Twilights. She glared at me and sighed, "You know Night Sky, it's not nice to check out your marefriend's mom."

Well, that's a bit of an overreaction. If it's just a quick glance without perverted intentions then I'd say that nothing is wrong here.

11242652

Well Velvet thought it was bad regardless.

Would've given upvote if it wasn't for the awful Drama and characters being horrible.

So thumbs down

All right, my time to vote is right in the middle. I guess it's my turn to get my thoughts; wish me luck and pray for me if I can make it.

Okay, I read it; I give my vote. I don't like this fanfic, and the fetishes were a significant turn-off. If you're into that thing, it's just weird. Yes, it counts as cheating, but the main character OC did in the story. I get the story I dislike.

11541134

Thanks for being civil in your reasoning for disliking the story. To be honest, this is one of my stories that I can't even bring myself to read again....long story short, it is one of those "WTF was I thinking when I wrote it" types.

11541322
With the title, you could have changed it to make it more questionable. Maybe if you did examples like this:

It isn't cheating if it's her... her from the future, right?
Oc x (future Twilight who time traveled)

It isn't cheating if it's her... her from a parallel world?
Oc x ( another Twilight)

It's the OC still with Twilight in the title. But you still got the strange question of what if of these scenarios happening.

11541346

The whole time traveling Twilight does sound like an interesting idea....right now though I'm working on a couple of SFW projects....perhaps I could do something like that further down the road.

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