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SonicBlitz18


A rocking brony with a love for crossover and adventure. Currently part time in college

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A large portion of the it, towards the end is all in bold.

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Yeah I don't know why it did that in the first place.

This was a epic add-on to this universe I can't wait to see more(no rush) I hope he gets a harem to.

That's so fucking hot. Cow girls are extremely sexy and deserve love. Especially when they'd be willing to give you milk.

I hate being that killjoy, but you can't link nude pics bud :trollestia:

Might wanna sort that out before your story gets taken down.

Wait, sequel?

Eternal Flames Belongs to Him.

Gee, I didn't know Powerpuff Girls villains made OCs too.

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I was talking about Isreal Yabuki

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The best he can do is saying the name of the artist and site, and that is with high risk. Not the link unless he wants to get his story down.

What’s the artist name?

Some potential errors I noticed:

What made the outfit match was the cow horn Barrett

Uppercase B should be lowercase?

‘So glad that their are eternal heat spells,’

there

‘Come on, hurry up and cum already,’ she thought to herself impatiently.

That thought is currently not in italics.

‘I’m so glad I used this spell,’ Sunset thought to herself as Eternal’s thrusts were strong, fast, and steady. Eternal had a firm grip on her ass, giving it a few spanks making Sunset shudder in response. If that wasn’t enough, he would lean over and grope her leaking tits again, making her squirt milk every time he gave them a squeeze.

Why is the text in bold from this paragraph onward?

Arm length fingerless gloves and thigh highs were still left on as she felt herself being forcefully turned to face her prey. She could see the

Arm length fingerless gloves and thigh highs were still left on as she felt herself being forcefully turned to face her pred. She could see the

Sunset couldn’t even resist as he started to push in more of his dick and rubs her like a mad dog and makes her go crazy

Sunset couldn’t even resist as he started to push in more of his dick and ruts her like a mad dog and makes her go crazy

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