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Divan1229


I'm just a half-voracious reader. Not a writer.

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I don’t want to compare but something I notice in these years is that ‘diaries of a madman’ have more Oc’s talking rather than thinking or doing. The curious thing is that both of you have many people following and both have very long and immersive stories.
Your story is more about thinking and doing rather than just talking and explaining. To put it simply, it is better to show than tell.
Many people saw the characters grow on us because of that, you show us that. Thank you for sharing the stories that have been on your head for years. You have avoided serious landmines on the story that could have screwed them over time and even teach us how to avoid them instead.

Oc overpowered? Training is a must and how they do it. Work hard for it. Teach people about the OC by their actions and not their words like the gods.
Never underestimate an enemy nor a friend. Overestimate your enemies when you can.
The story will go as far as it has to, it does not matter the time it takes. It’s the effort you put what it counts and what we see.

We saw Arthur growing from a broken memory into a godlike being by training, will, time, and wisdom. Like BlackJack from Project Horizons and Lil’pip from Fallout Equestria(Original), he is a person willing to Sacrifice himself for those who he cares, everything he has, he is willing to give.
And he has the Perseverance to follow the path he takes to the very end.

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Everyone thinks that. It's once you get into it do you realize you were deceived! Lol. Glad you're enjoying it!

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Everything, the start may seem a bit of a mary sue but to this day? Champion. This is the type of story that you read like a novel. I am at 135. I do download by EPUB because it is easy for me to read when the internet has a bad connection.

Thanks for the fave on Star Eater! Thumbs up if you like it! What do you enjoy most about the story so far?

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