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Shadicbro Brony
A 23 year old Brony with a good heart, loves good romance stories, sad, and adventure. Those who are friendly to others is a friend of mine. As long as you have friendship, you're never alone.
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Are you going to update spyro dawn of friendship at some pointi?
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not for a while, but I wont ignore it.
Love it! It's awesome as hell. But.. There is a few blips.
Head instead of had
Don't forget the e at the end.
Add a w and it's Bawk. Like a chicken~ Lol kidding. But It's back. Not bak
Can't wait for more of this Remastered Version~
Can't wait for the updates?
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yeah i expected. My keys on y laptop dont work as goo as they used to, so I will be expecting these kind of errors in my work.
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Damn. Well it's still good. I'll keep reading and helping out as much as I can
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much appreciated. thank you. :)
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No prob Bob
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Thanks
Now that I think about it, this is probably the best decision you ever made. But, if you want to have something's from the old, I recommend you add a tag mainly because it didn't have any original events or lack of it.
Are there going to be drawings in this version two?
I have mix feelings about this on the one hand I understand why you doing this there nothing wrong improving you old work and making it better but on the over hand it's a shame the old version of the story is now is finished for good i loved the old story I read over and over I enjoyed the charter, they name and they adventures, I was over the moon when I read the story was coming back its been so many years I had alway fread the story was forgotten do to life or writer block. It make me sad that the old story I new all this years is gone i will miss the art work and some of the story as you said some of it will be changed but that wont stop me from reading the remastered version and I hope you have a easier time writing this story then you did the last time giving the unfair treatment you received from before, good luck man
Same but different.
Take time friend for writing a story isn't easy.
Listen, as someone who read the first version, this is better, but there are still core elements of the story that can't be salvaged. Too much backstory is still given in the first chapter for us to relate to the main character, his color scheme is still red and black to indicate edginess and subsequently farm sympathy points from the ponies, and he still gets sent to a pony world where he'll play around with a harem, have a bunch of sex, become the town hero, and save the world for wish-fulfillment. Displaced stories rarely, rarely work, especially with Isekai protagonists. I get it, you've grown a lot in the past five years and want to remaster this, but should you remaster it at all? Why not just create something newer and better than a Displaced story utilizing your newfound storytelling skills?
Now, this is a lot better than the first version. Daniel feels more mature now and I can tolerate him more now. In the first story, he was too soft for my taste so it's a good thing you changed that in this story. I also started to write my own story that is a crossover with your first EHS. I don't want to pressure you into anything but since your writing a newly remastered version, I've been thinking that since my story focuses on your old EHS that this can be like another timeline where Daniel is more of a man if you will and Since my OC can travel through other universes that him and Daniel clash at one point and that they team up and such. So it would be good that this story and mine are happening at the same time. I have been a fan of this idea for a while now. But I'm leaving that decision up to you. Great remastered version. I put a tracker on it and put it under favorites. Can't wait for more chapters
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you'd be surprised what kind of new ideas and development I have planned for this new remastered story of my old one. I can understand your criticism and I appreciate the background of what you're telling me. There are some things that wont be hanged, such as the backstory of Daniel. I kept it there so I can give people a reminder of who he is, but some changes are his attitude like I mentioned in my author note at the end of the chapter. his hairstyle I kept cause I like the color scheme of his hair. He dyed his hair red a bit. As for the storyline of what he did from the old story, I will agree things were rushed, his abilities, his power, the harem, sex, etc. I will mention now all that will change and I will try to make slower development. Sex however, I will mention will be off and on depending whats going on. Some that will be at the bggining or such will be :Friends with beenefits: if you call it that. But some will be in seperate chaptrs so they dont overwhelm the story like before. want to skip it, by all means. I do appreciate the feedback on what you're saying. Thank you for it.
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thank you for the feedback. I promise the remastered will be better than ever. :)
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Im looking for an author that can do the art. Ill talk to my old artist and see if he can do more for me, but any other art will be grat form others.
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I'll try my best to put that in. Thank you for your feedback. :)
Let’s see how much has changed :3
There is a E there. But wow! Love the new conditions to the story and the chapter. *Smiles* Can't wait for more. Also hopefully if you do decide to allow OC's. That you'll tell us when you want them in there.
Is the remake gonna keep the old art or no art. I’m glad it’s working out so far.
Aw, I was expecting one of them to gag him. Oh well, you can't win em all.
I think you meant piece of fish. Also, not that I don’t mind seeing these characters but when WILL the ponies show up? i.e. will the next chapter been them getting to Zecora and him being able to speak or will it be that AND him being one or all of the M6?
Oh snap the story is being re-done , :0 out of curiosity why did you decide to re do it?
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he finally realized it was a mess of a story, yes, it took him THIS long,
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Daniel will meet the ponies about three or four chapters from now. I have some ideas I want to add in that will affect the story for later. you'll understand what I mean whn it gets to that point. Also, my laptop is old and some of the keys are hard to push down to put in when i work. I miss them whn I re read the chapter and see it done.
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I will not deny what you say. I will agree, the chapters from the beggining of EHS were VERY cringing and horrible. I was a bit stubborn in the past when I started working on my first stories on this site. now more matur I understand where people are coming from and why my old chapters wr bad.
Glad you're back keep up the good work
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thank you, and thank you for the watch. :)
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it's fine, these frist two Chapters are already 1000% better, :D
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It happens to me, my keyboard does not have a Z functioning, neither the FN nor left control working. I have to use the digital keyboard inside Windows.
This, for people, can be a Start down to memory lane.
A katana isn't a real sword? How is it not a sword?
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Compared to how jumbled this story is so far? You must be joking. I'm willing to give it my usual 5 chapters and I hope that the story will be less jumbled as well as the characters will be more likable.
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i think at least it begins better then the OG, but that’s just me i guess,
I like where this newer version is going. Good job so far
Glad to see that you are back! I love the fact the the Colors from the first story are being introduced as a mystery element near the beginning of the fic. I know you said to voice suggestions on the first chapter, but I wanted to do it here, as I didn't want to be too late to the party. So, the main "gripe" I had with EHS was that Daniel was too much of a Gary/Marty stu (Too perfect). I think the first chapter addressed some problems, and I am glad you did that. One thing I would like to voice is the "harem". I know a lot of people shit on harems, but I think that is because a lot of writers don't do it well. A suggestion that I have, is to make the "harem" smaller. Also, many of the characters were just two sided coins, they were either good, or bad. They borderline wanted to get in his pants, or they wanted to see him dead (with obvious exceptions, like the elemental dragons). So change some characters around. Add some lawful, neutral, or chaotic goods or evils. Just some suggestions from me, and I can not wait to see where you take EHSR. Looking forward to it!
Really good chapter! Keep up the good work
So far absolutely perfect it's going to be funny when she finds out that he's not a little boy and it's going to be a little sad when she figures out and if she's not taking care of little boy
Here's my question: Daniel's been bound, so when will he be gagged?
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Well that depends on how long they live for they live for normal life spends like 100 years or so then yes she’ll be sad but if she lives for hundreds of years or thousands .
Can’t follow this but I’ve not completely lost interest. Sorry it’s too weird for me.
KO awesome chapter, man Daniel is having a hard time with these pony folks as they try to take care of him and I hope he will be able to understand their language soon so can learn more about Equestria.
Ooooo! Can't wait for more~
This is definitely different. I’m enjoying it so far
What is that language they are speaking, did you make it up for the story?
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Me and Shadic made it, like being teleport into a other country like Papua New Guinea language which has 820 indigenous languages.