So far absolutely perfect it's going to be funny when she finds out that he's not a little boy and it's going to be a little sad when she figures out and if she's not taking care of little boy

Here's my question: Daniel's been bound, so when will he be gagged?

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Well that depends on how long they live for they live for normal life spends like 100 years or so then yes she’ll be sad but if she lives for hundreds of years or thousands .

Can’t follow this but I’ve not completely lost interest. Sorry it’s too weird for me.

KO awesome chapter, man Daniel is having a hard time with these pony folks as they try to take care of him and I hope he will be able to understand their language soon so can learn more about Equestria.

Ooooo! Can't wait for more~

This is definitely different. I’m enjoying it so far

What is that language they are speaking, did you make it up for the story?

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Me and Shadic made it, like being teleport into a other country like Papua New Guinea language which has 820 indigenous languages.

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everyon has thier taste in many stories. you have your reasons and comments what u think of my work. I dont judge you for it. any typ of feedback is appreciated onw hat the progress is, but I can let u know the story will get better in the progression of the next chapters

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Okay I was just curious.

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The old chapters weren't that bad, but they were a little all over the place. I'm glad though You're taking more time to fix up the roughness of your original storyline.

Nice chapter. Though I didn't like that Daniel got mad at the end when the two sisters started to fight and hurt him in the process. He could see Purple was sorry for what she did. So he should accept her apology not walk passed her cause she hurt him by accident. My OC will need to have a talk with him if he continues to act that way, getting angry over the little things. Overall keep writing, its a nice story so far

I need pictures or the chapter in the original that has the pictures it’s been so long since I’ve read the story that I don’t remember how the OC characters looked

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if Daniel undrstood them, he would have more understanding. though you will admit anyone, including me or you would be upset a bit if you got punched int he gut and tossed asside when trying to stop a hated argument.

>>Shadicbro Brony
Imperious is watching, he approves, (Aka I like what you have been doing so far, and await when oc's start showing up)

I'm really starting to like the remastered version of the story EHS that's one of my favorite stories on fim keep up the good work and I'm looking forward to the next chapter of EHSR

name of my mother in cursive named “Serena” And my grandfather “Derik”.

i do not think we ever got to know that names of these two in the old version,

When did he become her son?

So he is like the alien dude from the movie Paul