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At some point in the story, he better be getting his orbs back. That, or taking something something from Twilight that she holds equally sentimental.
This was a good chapter and great character development for Seventy-four. Though i gotta ask will pink or purple be singing mor ABBA again? I truly hope so!
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AH a fan as well, I'll see if he would like dancing queen to be the next song for them :)
Where are my testicules summer.
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That or one of my favorites "In a Rich Man's World" Though i guess it would be "In a Rich Mare's World"
Love the back story on 74. I love to learn more of the three hybrids.
So is Daniel still going to get together with the people he got together with in the original?
Is Daniel and barb going to get a good relationship together later on? Just asking if barb and Daniel are going to have a romantic feelings for each other
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Well-thought-out review and I have to agree. Anytime you reboot a story there is a risk. Hollywood for example is famous for destroying fantastic movies by rebooting solid work with garbage.
While I'm not thrilled with this story, It's not Hollywood levels of bad. It's about average as stories go here.
I'm up to Chpt 7 at this point and already Daniel is prone to very foolish decisions. After the murders, I and most intelligent people would place as much distance between themselves and the obvious psychos. I understand that he needs to be arrested to steer the story through certain plot points, but at this point in the story self preservation would kick in. "These guys are going to get executed, and I need to GTFO of here."
Now what the Author did do right was in the creativity of the overall situations and the mixed tech of the world. I have no problem with the porn-esque measurements, or the extended lifespans. Reasonable artistic license. I greatly appreciate how the character doesn't freak out at the different races and magics. That is so over done that its ridiculous. It's nice to see a "Normal" reaction for a change. Also, not dropping into the mostlyfree forest on entry to the world is also a nice change. And last but very much not least, the more adult reactions to sex and nudity. Also, a nice change. Far too many writers write their characters responding to sex, nudity, etc like they were 12 year olds.
So in short, while no masterful epic, it's not horrible either. Some creativity in here, but it does suffer form character low IQ issues that do cause problems for the reader.
The Monk
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