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KarmaSentinal
Inspiring drifter in the sea of the written language.
KarmaSentinal
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Very good!
That was a fine story well done indeed, tho it kind leaves you wish for a Sequels to see how getting Nightmare into the modern world and her Dealing with Celestia and Luna, And Dusk dealing with a Celestia and Luna who might try and kill there love
While I'm sure rule 34 also applies, I think in this case it should be rule 63.
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Fair enough, I’ll update the tag.
You need the porn tag for this to be an entry in the contest, looking forward to reading it!
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Copy that!
Well this was a fun read, I always like shipping Dusk Shine with Nightmare Mood to dom over him, I hope this leads to a full story sequel.
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Just something basic that's been on the back burner for a while now, and after putting three stories on hold decided now was the time to either write it or burn it. XD
If I do write more for it, I might just post it in this story as an epilogue of sorts.
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I don't think it would come down that them having to duel. XD It would be more of Luna and Nightmare yelling at each other while Celestia would be on the brink of snapping as she tried to figure out where it all went wrong. If I do decide to write additional content for this story, I will post it here for convenience sake.
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Finally a challenge to Luna in a shouting match there will not be a window left, And he can always say to Celestia, you told me to reform Discord why not Nightmare, But yeah that sounds like fun
Well written, I kind of want to see where a story like this could lead long term. What are the political and ethical ramifications of finding out that you have a magical twin or former self given autonomy? Is Luna the real princess of the night or is Nightmare the one who came first? What does it mean for magic and the sky to have two mares who are embodiments of the night? How do the two come to terms with their existence, and each other?
What does an Equestria ruled by this Dusk Shine look like, is it more nocturnal, or crepuscular, or does it stay diurnal? Is it more war like, or perhaps it is peaceful but with less patience for oppositional nations? Maybe its just the same.
I enjoyed reading this.
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Thanks for the heads up. I’ll update it as soon as I can.
What a great update Short and to the point while still having a Great talk with a close Friend, I Do hope you keep making more
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Honestly, this was a really fun concept to explore and I might possibly write a follow up as early as next year. The time frame is to give myself enough time to finished the other two stories I'm currently writing.
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Nice i can easily say i am looking forward to it
Thank you for submitting to Dezmo's contest! I am Kalash93, one of the judges.
This is a very very good story. The dialogue and interplay are splendid. Most interesting is your diction, you keep everything in a technical tone and deliberately emphasize the detached intellectual side of Dusk Shine. This is excellent use of first person perspective.
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THANK YOU! I was hoping someone would catch the word usage in the second chapter! It's wonderful to hear a judge likes my story, but I'm more thrilled that someone caught my intent and made a comment letting me know. Most of the time I'm left wondering if I was too vague or if people noticed but weren't impressed.
So once more thank you for the comment, and confirmation I'm doing something right!
I love where this is going, but the sheer number of little typos and mistakes really take me out of it. I know it'd be unfair (and against the rules) to edit the story while judging is underway, but I hope you'll have the chance to polish it up after the contest ends.
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I appreciate you taking the time read my story, let alone proof read it. I don't have an editor, and heavily rely on Gdocs , and FIM Spell check for all of my stories. Once the contest is finished, I'll go back and give it a look over since I haven't read the story since publishing, so hopefully I'll be fresh of mind to tackle it.
This is strangely adorable.
Whale done.
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🥺
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I’ll say that I genuinely hope you feel inspired to write that sooner than later. This is an interesting start!
Edit: huh. I went to check out your shelf again and see if there was anything else I’d missed that sounded interesting and found a sequel that fimfiction for some reason was not displaying at the end of the last chapter. Welp, guess I know what I am reading next!
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Hey, glad to hear you were interested enough in the story to seek more like it out! Just a heads up, 'Under the Apple Tree' is a soft sequel and not the true sequel- that will be released later in the year. At the moment it's on hold so I can finish writing Colonel Hooves which is nearing the final chapters, and after that Ill start the Night's favorite time sequel as well as a Celestia one shot.
The funny thing is that, like "My Love, the Night" there are only 2 chapters here without a sequel.... sad-funny joke....
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No sequel yet…
There is a sort of transitional story in the works that will eventually lead to a proper sequel. The next chapter of that applejack/dash is already over 11k words, and it is on hold until I finish another story of mine. Hang in there!