Very good!

That was a fine story well done indeed, tho it kind leaves you wish for a Sequels to see how getting Nightmare into the modern world and her Dealing with Celestia and Luna, And Dusk dealing with a Celestia and Luna who might try and kill there love

Rule 34 Twilight

While I'm sure rule 34 also applies, I think in this case it should be rule 63.

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Fair enough, I’ll update the tag.

You need the porn tag for this to be an entry in the contest, looking forward to reading it!

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Copy that!

Well this was a fun read, I always like shipping Dusk Shine with Nightmare Mood to dom over him, I hope this leads to a full story sequel.

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Just something basic that's been on the back burner for a while now, and after putting three stories on hold decided now was the time to either write it or burn it. XD

If I do write more for it, I might just post it in this story as an epilogue of sorts.

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I don't think it would come down that them having to duel. XD It would be more of Luna and Nightmare yelling at each other while Celestia would be on the brink of snapping as she tried to figure out where it all went wrong. If I do decide to write additional content for this story, I will post it here for convenience sake.

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Finally a challenge to Luna in a shouting match there will not be a window left, And he can always say to Celestia, you told me to reform Discord why not Nightmare, But yeah that sounds like fun

Well written, I kind of want to see where a story like this could lead long term. What are the political and ethical ramifications of finding out that you have a magical twin or former self given autonomy? Is Luna the real princess of the night or is Nightmare the one who came first? What does it mean for magic and the sky to have two mares who are embodiments of the night? How do the two come to terms with their existence, and each other?

What does an Equestria ruled by this Dusk Shine look like, is it more nocturnal, or crepuscular, or does it stay diurnal? Is it more war like, or perhaps it is peaceful but with less patience for oppositional nations? Maybe its just the same.
I enjoyed reading this.

• Must link to this contest's group page somewhere in story’s long description.

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Thanks for the heads up. I’ll update it as soon as I can.