Fellatio is Magic

Donttouchmysqueenus

Donttouchmysqueenus #1 · Jul 25th, 2020 · 2 · ·

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Awsome and very hot, even better than the prequal. More happy suckfics make the world go round.

Rafvtell

Rafvtell #2 · Jul 25th, 2020 · 2 · 10 ·

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Kinda a shame you dedicate this level of writing for porn fic, but it was very good.
I wasn't seeking clop material, and Blowjob aren't really my thing, however the plot itself deserve an award, if there exist one for that type of story.

Vis-a-Viscera

Vis-a-Viscera #3 · Jul 25th, 2020 · 2 · ·

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So why hadn’t the young mare notified her teacher already?
That might have something to do with Twilight’s usual sheepishness, especially in light of the conversation that was certain to prove to be quite heated if her suspicions were indeed correct. Or it might be because of Celestia’s huge drooling cock lodged deep inside her throat.

Well, that's a suddenness even Ron Burgandy can appreciate.

Wonderful story, and it hits all the right emotive notes from the jump. Happy to share the marquis with you, Spoonfed, 'specially with my first commissioned fic.

44burn

44burn #4 · Jul 26th, 2020 · 3 · ·

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What's next Discord, Queen Chrysalis, Sombra, Tirek etc...

Donttouchmysqueenus

Donttouchmysqueenus #5 · Jul 26th, 2020 · 1 · ·

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Celestia couldn’t imagine Twilight being able to defeat all of the nation’s enemies simply by sucking them off. After all, some of them didn’t even have dicks! At least, as far as she knew. That meant Celestia still needed to make sure Twilight had the Elements of Harmony working before some other evildoer descended upon the nation.

This is indeed a setup for the next instalment. Probably Chrysalis, as I dont find Discord in a male or R63 version particularly sexy. After that im not particularly sure if we will do Sombra, as Twilight doesnt exactly encounter him quite like she does NMM and Chrysalis.

I was thinking after Chrysalis I might commission a few short snippets into the life of Twilight the element of blowjobs, perhaps a “lesson” from Celestia from before NMM, her having an intimate evening with Celestia and Luna, giving Cadance a pick me up throating before she goes off to fight Sombra etc.

zachary12

zachary12 #6 · Jul 26th, 2020 · 1 · 1 ·

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nice work

44burn

44burn #7 · Jul 26th, 2020 · · ·

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What about Tirek or Cerberus? Honestly I thought of Tirek after seeing that you responded, though,I don't see Cerberus as viable.

Donttouchmysqueenus

Donttouchmysqueenus #8 · Jul 26th, 2020 · · ·

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Cerberus no, Tirek probably not as I think this silly series will come to an end when Twilight Ascends.

44burn

44burn #9 · Jul 26th, 2020 · · ·

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You could always commission it that she gains her castle and ascends at the same time as defeating Trek is more worthy of Ascension and fits within the theme of your stories then having some cutie marks rearranged

LucarioFan2066

LucarioFan2066 #10 · Jul 26th, 2020 · · ·

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“What’s even the point of conquering it if it’s so pathetic?” Some other pony voiced their question.

...I'd say that a "pathetic" kingdom (or principality, to be accurate, since there's no kings or queens) would also have a "pathetic" military, making it easy pickings for would-be conquerors, who would then either conscript the inhabitants into the military, or into manual labour to support the conqueror's home country.
That just makes sense, to me.

LucarioFan2066

LucarioFan2066 #11 · Jul 26th, 2020 · · ·

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“Mhmm.” Twilight looked back at Luna’s body, thinking for a second. “I… I just let her fuck my throat for hours, cumming her brains out until she was dry. Isn’t that what you’ve wanted me to do? Why you’ve been teaching me how to pleasure you all this time?”

'Er...damnit. This isn't what I meant for her to learn! I might need to look for another student now...sigh. It's obvious this mare's a second failure; hopefully the next one will be able to take a hint and use the Elements...after all, Discord will eventually escape, among other potential threats...'

shadow wolf1573

shadow wolf1573 #12 · Jul 26th, 2020 · 6 · ·

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Now you gotta make stories of twilight sucking off all the major villains.

Krimble

Krimble #13 · Jul 28th, 2020 · 2 · ·

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Incredible! God, I can't tell you how much I'd love to see more oral fics from you. My only suggestion would be to use some more of the nasty description words you used in the first one. There's something about the raw sexual nature of face-fucking that's only amplified when there's something dirty about it. In the first story, you'd bring up the taste and stench of Celestia's unwashed cock. The taste of sweat on flesh. The musk. It just drew attention to how this wasn't just two individuals making love; this was a futa-mare shoving every inch of her cock down her student's throat, turning her into a slutty cumdump who craves the taste and smell of her crotch.

The sequel was very good, don't get me wrong. I just think that the language you used in the first story was an important part that set the mood and contributed to the quality of the story.

PonyDragon

PonyDragon #14 · Jul 29th, 2020 · 2 · 1 ·

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All the signs were there, plain before her eyes. And yet all the ponies in the nation acted as if nothing serious were happening, completely ignorant of the impending doom about to swallow not just Equestria, but possibly the whole known world!

Don't think to hard about it.
Tthis is just ponies being ponies.

The black mare’s huge half-flaccid cock hung casually beneath her, making a complete mockery of her dignified appearance.
“Mwhahaha, am I not royal enough for you? Don’t you know who I am?” the alicorn continued on, seemingly unaware of the large meatrod dangling under her body.

Maybe she would gain more resüect if her dick would be fully errected instead.
The mares would be intimidated and fearful of her powerful tool, and the stallions would see their place below her.

Whole dissertations could be written on the significance and breath-taking glory of those life-lines pumping blood through the alicorn’s royal dick.

Later she will proof this assumption by doing exactly that, right?

It wasn’t uncommon for Celestia to have Twilight deepthroating her cock mere seconds after their lessons started, and to even begin vigorously thrusting her hips for good measure. Turns out, all that time the Princess was thinking far ahead, making sure her student was prepared to seize the opportunity when it came.

: "Yeah, that's exactly why I did it. Only that and nothing else. Hehe..."

Thee shall pleasure us and consume our seed whenever we command, or serve us in any other manner we may find necessary. And if thee upholds thy oath faithfully, thee shall be rewarded with the greatest of the world’s riches.”

: "I assure you: consume our seed and rewarded with the greatest of the world’s riches are already the same thing."

So she spoke back. She wasn’t going to surrender, as she certainly would not stop until Nightmare Moon was completely drained of every slimy drop of evil that still remained within her balls.

Be careful, Twilight:
If you merely drain the evil, the evil will continue to exist and looking for a new body.
And since it will already be in your belly it might try to make you its new host...

Good story!
I enjoyed reading it.

Master king