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FanficReader920


I like reading stories more than writing them, but I thought I'd give writing a shot anyway.

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If you told Gallus before he moved to Equestria that he would become a part of the hippogriff royal family, he'd call you crazy. Yet, here he is, and the anxiety is killing him.

Luckily, there's a pony in attendance that knows a thing or two about marrying into royalty.

My entry for the May 2020 Pairing Contest.

I want to thank FloydienSlip and RTStephens for their help with editing this story and their invaluebale feedback. Also, a shoutout to Nitro Indigo and anyone on the Fimfiction Discord server that gave their feedback as well.

Featured on 5/31/2020! Thank you to everyone that made this possible!

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On one claw, there was a trio of pristine white circular sofas that made it feel like he was sitting on a cloud.

I like this description. I don’t think it was there in the draft, was it?

I’m mainly commenting because I’m surprised you’ve gotten so many likes, yet no comments.

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I was just thinking the same thing! Thank you so much for commenting.

As for the description, I'm pretty sure it was there from the first draft, but I wrote that long enough ago that I can't really remember. And now that I think about it "Sitting on a cloud" could actually be an accurate description for something in Equestria.

That was great! Reminds me of when I got married. I was doing really good until my best man told me it was time to go and I kinda panicked for a few seconds before getting it together. Well done story!

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Thank you so much! I'm happy this story made you recall something in your own life! Hope you and your wife had a nice wedding and are still going strong.

I wonder if Ocellus got some of her changeling friends together so to throw a mock changeling invasion at the wedding. You know, so to continue the tradition. :rainbowlaugh:

Anyway, nice story. :twilightsmile:

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Thank you so much!

I'm sure somecreature made that joke at the reception dinner while drunk on cider.

Well that was just heartwarming.

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Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

:facehoof: THAT'S BROTHER TO A GENIUS

:duck: Oh no you didn't
:moustache: Yep. It said sister

:twilightoops: Why?

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Because this guy couldn't decide between the phrase "having a genius sister" or "a brother of a genius." and they ended up blending together.

Thank you for calling it out. I got a good laugh out of that. Fixed now.

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:pinkiehappy: We all get the jitters before the big event

:moustache: Not me
:duck: Of course not dear Spikey , We eloped
:facehoof:

A changeling invasion to kidnap the bride for a brides party.. Other than gender doesn't quite work get Smolder to stage a dragon invasion to start the bachelor party

Finally, he confessed, "I joined because I wanted to make something of myself. There was nothing for me back in Griffonstone, and I didn't think there was anything else I could do. With the guard, I was able to transform myself into a creature that was respectable and... worth something."

Definitely nothing left in Griffinstone. Made sure of that when I lead my fellow prywhen comrades to loot and burn it to the ground multiple times. Only for the freaking wingbardains to take it right back every single time and forcing me to withdraw to the blackrook mountains and stage a very long bloody gurellia warfare since I also got teamed up on by the giffonian empire until enough died and others got involved and my army got reformed enough to counterattack which was just as bloody and far to long

If you have 0 idea what I’m talking about, look up equestria at war. Hopefully you’ll find a few screen shots that will make it make a little sense. Tho you probably won’t understand until you read all about it. Which may take awhile. In which you may still be confused. I’m curious to see honestly. Who knows maybe you already know.

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No, I do not know what that is.

Were you just making a reference to that?

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Eeeyup. As you can see I am just a little obsessed. It’s also 2 am. Again. Operating on 10 percent Brain power and 20% phone. Apparently tiredness is similar to drunkenness. As you can see it also makes me a bitttttttttttt chatty about random useless stuff no one cares about.





Sleep, where art thou?!
I need thee!!!!!!!!!

10263566
It’s 3 am for me and I’m doing pretty well, though I’m a pretty big night owl anyway.

10263556
Ah. That reminds me of the Glorious days of dropping 100 magical nukes simultaneously on Griffinstone. Made everyone hate me. But it was glorious regardless.

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Especially cause the nukes actually do stuff in the mod:)

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Heh. I expect a dragon-style bachelor party would be intense. :rainbowlaugh:

We never got to know what gruff said

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Do you mind clarifying that, please? I’m not sure what you’re talking about here.

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Well i wondered what grandpa gruff what think and said about garrus getting married and becoming a prince.

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Oh.... well this story isn’t really about that. I write it due a contest where two character that don’t interact in the show get the chance to interact here.

Awww this is actually really sweet story so it looks like gallus is pretty nervous about the whole wedding and as much as he loves silverstream that's going to be a lot of changes throughout his life but shining armor came in to talk to him which was pretty cool to see them communicate with each other both have in common with each other about married the loyalty and it was awesome of shining armor advice about being married and everything this was a pretty nice story keep up the good work

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Thank you so much for the kind words! I'm glad you liked my story!

That was a nice heartwarming tail.
I know it was obvious to us reader the parallels but I am glad that the character talked about it too.
I like that the story was not all about that but the reasons why.
Good work your going in the Favs

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