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Deathscar


You'd be surprised at the emotions twenty-six letters can unearth

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In just 12 hours, Silverstream will depart for the holidays, leaving Gallus alone at the Academy. Despite her pleas, Gallus refuses to follow or even tell her why. That is, until a special pony arrives that night to his dorm room and poses two simple questions: why did they come to the Friendship Academy? And if the answer is to make friends then...

Why?


Proofread by VerumTee

Cover art from the Season 8 episode 'The Hearth's Warming Club'

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Comments ( 11 )

Well written, and a nice read!
Oh, and the giant brick of feelings of course! Quite a lovely story overall.

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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Happy holidays :)

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:twilightsmile: Same to you! I liked that it's a VERY different take on Silverstream's situation (I think it's a first actually!)

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Woo hoo! That makes me so happy to hear!

This was a great story. I love it. This was a well written story and a great reading experience.:twilightsmile:

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Thank you very much!

The concept of "Princess Cadence helping someone find the love of her life because it gave her a feeling about what makes her want to do something she did not want to do before" is not very novel, but I think that this time I can ignore it due to its justification in the same story.
In general, it's a pretty good reading.


English is not my primary language, forgive me if you see an error in my comment

This was beautiful!:twilightsmile:

Love their interactions. Very Hearthwarming

This was really nice. I liked how Silverstream explained why she thought her parents split up, and it made sense that she would ask Princess Cadence to help get her parents back together. It's good that there's more to her character than just bubbly and easily impressed with everything, like she seemed in her first appearance in the show.

Interesting idea to make Gallus' claustrophobia a result of PST, too.

Nice story.
Although I totally could go for seeing what’s next :pinkiehappy:

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