Pinkie barges into Sunset's apartment early in the morning with an urgent request.
Written for the Fimfiction Feghoot Festival.
A HUGE thanks to Lofty Withers, Shrink Laureate, and FloydienSlip for editing this story.
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Pinkie doesn't know everyone who goes to CHS. Immersion broken.
Aside from that, that sounds about right for Pinkie. Lovely little story. Thank you for it, and best of luck in the contest.
Somehow, I feel I should have seen that coming . . . But I did not.
Also, it says something about Pinkie that this is the first Feghoot story I’ve read that makes absolute sense and I could see actually happening, 100%.
9725663
Thank you so much! Feels great to write a story once in a while and not just reading and recommending them.
9725668
Thank you!
lol i literally face palmed at the ending.......i shoulda seen that coming lol
9725814
That reaction was canonically what Sunset did mentally after she heard that.
I wonder if Pinkie put the money in the pants pocked first, just to set up[ the punchline?
Se even got a breakfast out of it, so well played, Pinkie.
9725876
She can simultaneously be one step ahead and one step behind.
Perhaps. Perhaps Not. You never know with Pinkie.
....Beautiful.
...Ly painful. 
I indeed completely should have seen that coming. I was even reading the story looking out for what pun might be coming. And yet you got me good. Ow.
A classic feghoot indeed. Nice one!
9727044
Thank you!
Pretty good little story. That feghoot made me laugh. The formatting is a little overdone, in my opinion, but that's just my tastes. Good job overall.
9738931
I was just trying to allow the audience a glimpse into Pinkie Pie's headspace.
But I'm glad you like it!
I feel silly that I laughed at that pun.
9743107
Then I've done my job!
aauuugh
This is so great though.
9744699
The story or the line?
9744703
That line. :) The story was good too, don't get me wrong!
9744713
Got it. Just wanted to clarify that.
I love the Noodle Incident trope. I always pictured Sunset's face to have that shadowing on their face characters get when they're disturbed by a flashback. Know what I'm talking about?
Augh.
9725668
> Somehow, I feel I should have seen that coming . . . But I did not.
9727044
I indeed completely should have seen that coming. I was even reading the story looking out for what pun might be coming. And yet you got me good. Ow.
9744699
aauuugh
9744713
That line. :) The story was good too, don't get me wrong!
I want to repeat ALL of those comments.
If I could vote (kinda late), this would be the winner.
9792187
Oh my gosh! Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it!
One sign of a great story is that the lead up is interesting, and that the ending concludes with a pun that makes me throw my phone against the wall.
Well done! You’re getting my phone bill, but well done.
Breath in, Breath out, Breath In, Breath Out
Just dropping by to add to your upvote count and link to a quick review. The contrast between Sunset and Pinkie's characters is nicely handled, and although the punchline isn't the newest it's still done pretty well. As I ended my review by saying: Unless you despise feghoots and/or Equestria Girls, this is likely to make you chuckle. I did chuckle.
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Thank you! I appreciate it!