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luckyboys121


Just here mainly to comment on and like other peoples stories. Might right a few myself because I love the show and want to give back but I am also lazy so we'll see what happens

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The day had been saved, the ultimate life form known as Kars beaten, those were Joseph Joestar's thoughts as he closed his eyes and plummeted down to Earth. He smiled as he believed his bizarre life was about to come to an very honorable and heroic end. He was underestimating just how bizarre things can be as when he opens his eyes he finds himself as a pony in the world of Equestria. How will the young Hamon user handle this sudden change, find out after he finishes yelling, "OH MY GODDD!"

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Also fair warning, all flashbacks and references to the show will be based off the English dub, both because I personally enjoy and because I have seen no less then five different subs online (no real difference beyond saying Hamon instead of The Ripple, but I just figured I'd say it before someone commented)

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First off... IS THIS A JOJO REFERENCE. I love it.

Second.

Hamon Overedrive!"

No E. Can't wait for more of this

Next you’ll say: “Is this a Jojo Reference?”

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Thank you, Hoodini667-chan :twilightsmile:

Glad you like it

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Glad you loved it, and hope you'll enjoy the next chapter too :heart:

Also thanks for pointing that out, just corrected it :twilightsmile:

Hey, since Jojo ended up in Equestria, I’m guessing this means that Jotaro and Josuke won’t be born?

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Not in the way we know them no, but as you might be able to guess by the fact that this story has the romance tag, I can assure you that the Joestar bloodline will live on

So earth is doomed, Dio is still around.

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Yus! Those two Joestars need to live. Especially Josuke.

Comment posted by Fluffy-Boi deleted Mar 11th, 2020

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Since Josuke is my favorite JoJo (cloesly followed by Joesph as you may have guessed) I make this solemn pledge he will not cease to exist just exist different (if you've read part 8 you know full well that can be done very well)
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Love the new chapter and I will follow this story like trouble follows every Joestar.

"Just gotta deliver a steady dose of positive Hamon just like with Suzie Q and,"

Is there supposed to be another name there? If not then there is the mistake.

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I love Josuke too. He attitude, his kindness and the fact that his part at the least amount of deaths and the most stand users that turned over a new leaf or at the very least. Didn't do bad things anymore. Plus. Part 4 had one of my fave villains.

KIRA YOSHIKAGE AND KILLER QUEEN!

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Glad you liked and are following :twilightsmile:

As for that and, I meant for it be like "and then this will happen" but I guess it didn't fully come across so I went ahead and changed it, thanks for the help :heart:

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IKR! Josuke is like everything good about Jonathan, Joesph, and Jotaro all rolled into one! He's very kind and caring to everyone even former enemies, is a bit a goofball and a great problem solver, and has that temper and can give a beat down when he needs too

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No problem. It's my duty to help a fellow Jojo fan

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Yeah. He is my fave Hero. Plus that hair is fantastic.

Sorry, I can only picture stardust crusaders' Joseph Joestar at the moment. That's before reading though. It will probably change by the end of this. I look forward to this adventure.

Oh boy! I do like this. I keep having to remind myself when I hear his english voice that it's not an abridged series. I tried listening to the dub, but I just couldn't do it, I couldn't take it seriously.
Good story so far, from what I remember of jojo, he's pretty spot on, twilight is a little off and gullible, but I'm going to chock that up as Joseph's Hamon for now. He did outright control a couple horse zombies at one point. What's a little mental suggestion to that?
I look forward to seeing where you take this.

Wait, what romance tag? I didn’t see it when this fic was first posted. At least Holly won’t be as ditzy here.

REALLY HOPING THIS DOESNT GET DROPPED AFTER ONLY A FEW CHAPTERS LIKE MOST STORIES I REALLY LOVE THIS!

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I think I'll be able to keep this going better then my other stories since I love JoJo so much. I should at least be able to get it to a season finale just like Spinel (since I'd rank my passion for both about equal) :twilightsmile:

Given part 2 jojo is 6,6 I'm guessing he should be close or the same size as big mac as a pony

Time after time, I always wonder why Twilight didn't just teleport out of trouble instead of running blind.

This turned out better than I thought. You got young Joseph's character pretty down. Should be interesting to see how he behave around Celestia.

Twilight turned to Spike, still blushing but giving her best death stare as she simple said, "Tell this to nopony!"

Especially not Cadance! :facehoof:
Can I tell Shining there is a stallion living in our residence now? :moustache:
NO! :twilightangry2:

Having to read both normal speaking and thinking in the same sentence was pretty confusing. I suggest you use the italic font when the character 'think' to differentiate them.

Also, it was almost out of Twilight's character not to report strange thing (and unknown power) to Celestia.

Oooooooo! This is good! I imagine when Joseph meet Rarity he will put on the charm and she'd make a new outfit but then ask him to take off the scarf. Maybe call it ugly but then Joseph would either get pissed or get super depressed and talk about Caesar

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I agree with the italics idea. And twilight probably forgot about that in the excitement about learning it (and her crush), it's only the first day and she hasn't actually slept for two. It she doesn't do it the next day, then there'd be something off. I think she's got some time.

Great so far, I look forward to more.

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Thanks for the advice you two, just changed all the thoughts to be in italics and I'll try to remember to do that from here on out :twilightsmile:

As for writing to Celestia, you are correct that she probably should have done it by now, and will probably freak out asking herself why she didn't do it earlier once she has a clearer head

Art source/artist added to main description?
Would appreciate.

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Um... if you're referring to the cover art the artist is credited in the description

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I do believe I be a doof.
My apologies. XD

As Luna approached she saw that Celestia had the widest smile Luna had ever seen on her face before she pulled Luna into a bear hug saying, "OH MY GOSH LUNA! TWILIGHT MET A STALLION! I'M GOING TO BE A GRANDMOTHER!"

Spike, shouldn't you send this kind of letter to Shining or Cadance instead?

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This takes place mid season two, so Shining and Cadence are not married yet

that being said, you know they will get involved eventually... especially considering this has the Chrysalis character tag

Another great chapter. I wonder What Chrissy is going to do in the story. I saw that tag and now I am curious on what will happen

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I have a feeling that might be the case. That's exactly why I mentioned those two. If Spike want to threaten Jojo, he should tell Shining about it. If he want to annoy Twilight, he should mail to Cadance so Princess of Love would immediately come and give 'dating advices' to Twilight.

I really like the characterization on Tia and Luna, acting like proper siblings together. And we've got a hammy Celestia as well, I think that will fit well with our JoJo. I really hope you have Joseph do the "the next thing you'll say is . . ." To celestia and Luna.
I wonder if Spike keeps a tally on how much he and twilight owe each other?

I never read a fix about an overprotective mother Celestia fic but I already love it.

Yeah feel like twilight should be a bit more sharper and questionable but overall it’s a really good start and am loving the story

twilight seems a bit slow on a few of jojo mistakes but that could also be her crush blinding her to some of his inconsistencies. That would be an interesting inner conflict for her. Other than that one nitpick I really love this story and can’t wait to see what you have in store

Excellent story so far. You really captured Joseph Joestar at the end of Battle Tendency and I still can't believe he was able predict what Pinkie was going to say next.

well time for chaos:twilightoops: (really Good so far Cheers)

Whoa.. Mama Celestia came to town.. Yes!

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Hermit Purple probably helped...

JoJo chuckled and with a cocky smile he said, "I don't think so no... reading people is just one of my special talents."

More like annoying others is his specialty.

"WHERE IS MY DARLING TWILIGHT AND THE SCOUNDREL CALLED JOJO!?"

You make it sounds like Celestia has a thing for Twilight instead of maternal feeling. Plus, this line is more suit for Shining Armor than Celestia.

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Maybe. I'm not exactly sure when he acquires Hermit Purple in his life.

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He got Hermit Purple not long before he met Jotaro, due to Dio's return.

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I am aware of that. I just don't know when exactly he got it in terms of the start of Stardust Crusaders.

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