This story is a sequel to Sunset's A Pony Again
After Sunset Shimmer comes clean to her friends about wanting to be a pony again and is overjoyed at how they accept her decision she is excited to start her new life as a pony on Earth. Unfortunately for her she hasn't really thought this change of life out as much as she thought and now she has to deal with all kinds of unforeseen reactions and consequences. Will she come to regret her choice or will she stand by it no matter what? Find out here
This is going to be a fun little anthology series that I will probably update only when I have free time so don't expect regular chapter releases. Also this story is probably never going to be complete as I want to leave things open for new ideas I think of and adding in any new characters the Equestria Girls episodes add in later
Picture created by katakiuchi4u check them out on DeviantArt and I would just like to thank them as the image gave me several more ideas for the story
Once again a thanks to my friend Tyler for inspiring me to write this in the first place and of course thank you to all the fans of the first story who encouraged me to write this sequel and I hope you all enjoy it
yea thats about my reaction to a talking unicorn as well
Thank you all for reading and I am glad everyone likes it
. Again thank you all for encouragement and I hope I can continue to provide you with enjoyment 
. I just finished my final edit of the story and I just have a little word of advice to the other new writers out there. No matter how many times you read over something you are not gonna find everything wrong with it so don't stress out of every little issue. So if there is any glaring errors I missed please let me know and I'll see you all next time 
Ahhh! Demon llama!
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Is probably just assume I was dreaming...or my hallucinations have risen to a whole new level.
This is gonna be fun!
So, Flash is a xenophile. Fair enough.
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Lol yeah. Oh and thanks for reminding me that she is a unicorn as I forgot she had a horn for a second (I mean of course I remembered her magic but I forgot about the fact she actually had the horn on her head and I included that in a freak out in the next chapter)
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Oh my goodness this is so funny right now!
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Just changed it thanks for the feedback
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your welcome keep up the good work
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. Hope to keep you entertained with the later chapters too. 
Glad your enjoying it
D'aww,now I just imagine a Sunset Pony Petting club, spearheaded by Fluttershy and Flash.
Think anyone should let Adagio know said wish-granting pendant only works for Sunset and is heavily implied to be a seventh Element of Harmony?
Anyone?
No?
Good!
so the dazzles are back
So the CMC watched some InuYasha and tried to be Sango? Sounds like them.
And Adagio is going to try to steal Sunsets element? Possibly, but not confirmed to be, Empathy at that? Oh that should screw her, and possibly her sisters up even more than Sunset was for stealing magic.
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. And yeah I am still unsure how I'm gonna handle the dazzlings getting her pendent but thanks for reminding me that technically people who aren't bonded to an element can use it (like Sunset Shimmer did in the first movie) as that is giving me new ideas on how to handle it. 
Congratulations you've seen an awesome (and one of my all time favorite) anime
I’m gonna drop a bit of criticism here, so brace yourself.
First, there is already some style emerging from your work, which is quite a good start. Also the theme and plot are for now engaging.
Now the bad news.
You have a deep problem with the written format. This shows in how little you use punctuation, especially in the very long sentences you use. They are constructed following a train of thoughts and — even if intended — this is of the most terrible for the written medium.
People reading do not merely record the text in their heads. They look at a sentence, take note of the elements referring to a previous one, the ones allowing a future call for its content and finally extract meaning from it. You tend to make long sentence for them to contain the whole meaning you want to carry, but that’s not working: people get lost and have to trace back because they lost the meaning, and so do you. It clearly shows in the syntax and grammar errors you make. And I understand why they are so difficult to see: you can’t remember the beginning of the sentence when you reach the end.
You should use more punctuation; it can only help you.
It allows you to give a structure to your sentence and make it easier to notice errors. It gives meaning to your sentence — especially in dialogues — by telling the reader the flow of speech, thought or action. A fight is narrated with very short sentences, focusing on the action-relevant aspects only. On the contrary a calm conversation will be full of comas, dashes and outward-referencing sentences. And moreover it makes you story not look like a succession of blocks of text.
Also, you seem to struggle with the dialogue.
Putting it in the direct following of the narration is perfectly valid, but necessitates proper punctuation (yes, it again).
Comas are to be out of the quotation marks, for they are not part of what is said. An incomplete sentence shall not end in a dot. Prefer the use of dashes and ellipses (with the addition of obligatory marks; e.g. Cheerilee drifting off: “..?”). And finally the narration and dialogue shan’t commute if not necessary. This is directly directed on:
First, hangouts in hangouts is not correct. Use instead “words ‘quoted‘ words“ or “words «quoted» words”.
Second, the reader already pictures Sunset air-quoting because of the use of actual quotation marks instead of italics, emboldening or underlining.
I’m about done and I hope you will improve, even if I might have been a bit harsh. I still enjoy the story this far and am ready to give more advice (or gall as it could be seen) if needed. And continue the good work!
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Thank you for the criticism it was a little harsh but I needed to hear it. I have always struggled with punctuation and while I will take some of your advice into question when writing the next chapter I will still probably make mistakes as one of the reasons I like writing on here is because I don't have anyone like a teacher or an editor looking over my shoulder giving me criticism because I forgot one of the many obscure grammar rules (Plus when ever I try to follow the rules to the the letter I just end up getting confused and my writing gets even worse). Finally to explain the train of thought thing the reason behind it is that whenever I write I only really go in with a basic idea for the story in mind and I come up with the details as I am writing by thinking "what would the character do in this situation?". So it actually is my train of thought (and in a way the characters train of thought too). So in summation thank you for the advice and I will be sure to take it into account but don't expect me to change my whole writing style based around it. Have a good day
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Also you said
And according to grammarbook.com
That is how I have been using my commas throughout the story, though there may have been times where I accidentally misplaced them but I can assure you that this was always my intent. I am not trying to offend you or anything as I know very well that my grammar is not perfect but I do not think I broke all of the rules you said I did. Nevertheless I still appreciate your advice and will take it into account in the next chapter
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My bad, I mixed it up with French.
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It's fine everyone makes mistakes. Like I said before I have enough trouble keeping all the English rules of grammar straight so I can only imagine what it is like to have to keep multiple languages in check. Next time though you should probably double check that you have all the rules right before you provide constructive criticism because while I recognize that you still have several valid complaints and will think about them, others might see you made one or two mistakes and completely disregard your advice.
so it was updated but no updates huh
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Sorry about that It should be fixed now
Attention everyone I am sorry that for a few minutes this story appeared on the updated list before the new chapter came out. It was my bad I accidentally hit publish while I was editing and I didn't know what to do so I just hit depublish without thinking about how that would affect the que so again I am sorry and hopefully it will not happen again. Thanks for bearing with me I am still relative new to the website and how it works
have a good day
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That’s fine dude and I got to say this is pretty good
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. I know everyone makes mistakes and that it is no big deal but it's always nice to hear someone else say it's fine to 
I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks
I was gonna say it's probably a typo, but at the same time, it's got a nice ring to it.
Sonato~
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its okay the chapter was worth the mistake
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Thanks for pointing that out I am gonna fix it though you are right about Sonato being a good name. Tempted to keep it but I'll change it anyone as others might now see the beauty in the mistake
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Hopefully nothing like that will happen again but we'll see 
Thanks glad you like it
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only the future can tell
Aria, the voice of reason!
Ok, caught up on two updates and I’m loving how Sonata pulled a Pinkie “just a hunch” like guess. This’ll be fun!
Wait is this a villain with a brain? Villains aren't allowed to have brains.
I am happy to know that there are others who don´t especially dislike Flash either. I felt a little left alone cuz most of my friends don´t seem to like him and most of the FIMFics I´ve read about him were either sad or ridiculous.
It took me a bit to see the reference but InuYasha is one of my favourite anime of all time and I just recently re-binchwatched it so... go Hiraikotsu!
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Exactly I mean there is nothing wrong with him as a character at all. He is the cool dude who just does what makes him happy and yes he happens to popular because of it but that was never his goal. And it was just hilarious how clumsy he got around Twilight. Yes he hasn't gotten much screen time but in what he has gotten he has been established as a very likable character. (Also yes I realize I said earlier that I wan't gonna do a rant but here I am doing one anyway and for that I am sorry but nevertheless I stand by what I am saying)
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I think I most fans don't like him because he sinked many of their hot lesbian fantasy ships. I like flash he is not the most interesting character just a average and likable which people need to learn there is nothing wrong with that I mean not every character need issues to be interesting plus it's a kids cartoon for young girls fans tend to forget that.
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THIS IS NOW MY NEW HEADCANNON!!!
Ok, I noticed something that's starting to bug me. You say well instead of will. There instead of their or they're...
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Sorry about that I have trouble with homonyms. Thanks for pointing it out though and I just did an editing pass on the chapter and made sure that any use of those words is correct (I even used google to determine the official definitions and grammar rules for them). So hopefully I got them all and thanks for the advice
Rainbow Dash. Definitely Rainbow Dash. That's my guess, at least.
COMMENCE THE PETTING
who doesnt want to pet a cute little pony.
and poor Dash having to deal with Zephyr.
also imo both Aria and Sonata should ditch Adagio at some point.
man adigeo is determined to be a idiot
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Even better if it turns out there really is a demon, it really does have their brother, and they really were training in order to save him, and their fights become funny background events. Everyone's too distracted by cute magical ponies to notice the demon slaying shounen anime plot happening across the hall.
As far as I remember she only was a demon as a human.
Let's be honest here, that was mere bad luck rather than lack of brain, there's no way she could know that Sunset would enter in a club that same day.
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Lol, here's hoping for more references to that movie