This story is a sequel to A Love That Can Heal Your Pain
Pinkamiena Diane Pie, also known as Pinkie Pie, has always been someone that was special to you. Why wouldn’t she be? She was sweet, bubbly, funny, and cute as can be. So why in the world would her boyfriend just up and dump her out of nowhere? Especially when it seemed like they were great for each other. You decided to comfort your friend and get to the bottom of this. And maybe, just maybe, something else might come out of spending time with the beautiful party girl.
Cover Image by https://www.deviantart.com/the-butcher-x
Chapters (9)
A promising start! I await developments
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Thanks! Hopefully I won’t disappoint.
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Thank you!
Happy to see the new story!
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Hopefully I won’t disappoint! Thank you!
Im not ussually a fan of Pinkie Pie but you paint her in a new light good job keep it up.
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Thanks! I’m glad you like it!
You meant 'were' instead of 'where' right?
Sorry, I just had to, you know? I seem to have a Grammar Nazi living off of me inside my mind. He can be extremely compelling at times.
Enjoying your stories, including your first one tho! Keep up the good work!
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Sorry for the confusion, it’s meant to be were. It’s fixed now. Thanks for the heads up and thank you for enjoying the story!
Who are you going to do next?
Awesome chapter
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I’m gonna do rarity next.
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Thanks!
❤👏👏👏👏
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Thanks!
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Thank you very much!
This is nice. Thanks for your effort.
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Thanks!
How's the progress coming along for the next one? I'm way to hyped for it!
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I’m already in the middle of writing the first chapter of the next story, but I’m kind of struggling with what to do with it. I’ve also been busy with other things so it may or may not come out soon. I’ll get to it as soon as I can though, thanks for reading my story by the way!
Well that was quite an enjoyable little tale. Also quite an improvement over the previous one in terms of writing and especially grammar. There's still a couple issues here and there with with repeated word usage/sentence structure, and sticking to a tense, but overall nothing bad enough to really pull me out of the story. Excited for the next one.
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Thanks! Hopefully I won’t disappoint on the next story.
I really enjoyed this story, it was really sweet. I especially like how you break this story into multiple parts rather then a one shot, to keep it from being too big to read. And the number of pages, and the overall length of the story, was perfect; Not too short that the emotion feels rushed, but at the same time not too long that it overstays its welcome.
This was a very lovely and heartfelt story for everyone’s favorite pink party girl, and I Can’t wait to see what you have in store for the others
Me irl: “WOOHOO!”
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Thank you very much! I’m really glad you like it!
And this is why I'm glad you didn’t make Cheese Sandwich the Ex-Boyfriend, because this would have been OOC for him. And that would have made the story seem shallow. That was good judgement on your part.
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(Btw if/when you do Twilight’s story, idk if you will mention Timber Spruce or not, but i just wanted to let you know some trivia about him that you may/may not know: most people that i see do stories about him say that he’s like 25 or so, but in truth he is actually only a year-and-a-half older then Twilight, Just thought i’d bring it up)
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I do have somewhat of an idea of what to do for Twilights story. If you want to know then pm me that is.
Plus if we want we can just pretend that this Anon is Cheese Sandwich.
(Yet for some reason I can only think of someone whoa mix between Rei Kiriyama from March Comes in Like A Lion, and Lie Ren from RWBY, idk why)
It was a bright and sunny day at the city of Canterlot
*swats you* first rule, no one cares about the weather in the intro. Honestly, you’re next paragraph made a better first to set up the story
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*rubs head* sorry.
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Live and learn :)
literally the one and only thing I would have done differently is show how pinkie and Anon were just good buddies before she broke up with her boyfriend
Didn’t he already say that, and it didn’t work?
I feel like there was a reason he broke up with her.
Words I wish I could hear.
Wait, if he makes a new promise, does that mean it cancels out the old one?
How would that work?
I don’t ever remember her wearing that.
It doesn’t sound like she does.
So, do the opposite of what pinkie does?
Does that mean she’s already over her ex?
Well that worked well.
Oh yea, how he’s been doing?
Stupefied?
How long ago did that happen?
I feel like this will go bad.
Because you said it?
Well, they wanted an answer.
Wait, I thought it was around after they became friends that he developed a crush on her.
Huh, that easy.
Aww, it was nice of them to forgive him. Not easy to do.
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Dude you didn't dissect this one but the others you did
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I did?
Congratulations, you managed to melt my heart with this little story. Thank you very much, keep up the good work!