After everyone got on the deserted island due to their cruise being submerged, the Rainbooms try to think of a plan to sneak into Ponyville with every passenger not getting caught. In the meantime, everyone waits until the Rainbooms come up with their strategy.
Lyra Heartstrings had one heck of a vacation on the cruise but it was nothing like her last cruise vacation with Sweetie Drops. Her friends wanted to know why Sweetie Drops never came, not to mention she never been on the beach. Lyra tells the untold story to Derpy, Vinyl and Octavia everything that happened to her best friend's one and only cruise vacation.
Thanks to Daniyel099 for editing this.
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This is a logical fallacy. If nobody could survive that, how did Bon-Bon?
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Yeah, I could of done better of how Sweetie Drops still survive but I’ve never been on a cruise with a dangerous storm. Landing on the back feels less brutal then on the front. Yes I get my excuse is mostly BS but I was trying to come up with a reason she never went on a beach or cruise ever again. For me, having her seasick is too predictable since Applejack had that issue.
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Perhaps a broken limb?
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I saw movies and other media where people get serious damage with their legs, I wanted to do something different.
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OK.
Pretty good for being such a short story, I will admit there are some parts that could’ve been done better, but over all it’s pretty good.
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Thanks. How did you felt when Sweetie Drops fell from the lifeboat?
Bit of a shock honestly, I was worried because I didn’t know if you were going to kill her from the injuries or if she was gonna live against all odds.
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If she was going to die then this story would have the death tag.
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Yeah that makes sense, well anyways amazing story, I’ll have to read some of your other stories sometime.
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Take your time.