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[Second person fiction between you and Luna]This story is a more realistic take on a pony X royal sister fiction in the sense of how it would actually happen. After a spell cast by Princess Celestia goes awry.....you, a simple brony, have been sent directly to Equestria. No, no instant cutie marks or instant shipping is in this fiction. Trust me, I know what I'm doing. However, if you don't like human in Equestria stories OR steamy scenes, then stay away from this fiction. Simple as that.

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This right here. I have been looking for this for a VERY long time. Must have more. Moar. Now. Please
If thats alright with you

But seriously, this chapter did feel a tad rushed. Otherwise, I can't wait to see what you have in store for us.


1156262 ^THIS.

After a spell cast by Princess Celestia goes awry


Well, um all I am gonna say is yes Luna is best pony and well for Tia *CRASH*-

:trollestia:"don't you dare say it!!"

BABY GOT BOUNCE!!! Too late!.....*runs away* "GET BACK HERE!!"

Okay cya... Love the story, please continue, and I am going to die!!!!

I'm not much of a shipper nor do I read human in equestria stories but I'm gonna read this anyway.


*edit: read it, and not exactly my cup of tea. That was to be expected, so don't feel bad. This is pretty well written, so I'll give you a thumbs up and a pat on the back! People will certainly like this story.

Luna is best princess. That is all.*

soda machine doesnt work SEND IT TO THE MOON

family of ducks in your way SEND IT TO THE MOON


Jex, are you going to have us want this more than a cartain other story. :raritywink:

This is a good start, the scene is set for a few plausable scenarios, and the humour keeps anything that might be objectionable to some, under check.

No doubt I wont be the only one wanting more. :twilightsmile:

1156262 Even I noticed the rush. It seems to be a recurring error for me...

Well I faved it just to see how it will go within future updates. (don't need to mention the rush since you've noticed.) : )

I take it,as a something new so, good luck with it :]

1156823 Just try to lengthen out certain scenes more. If it's a brony who's just been jammed into the royal castle, I'm certain he's going to experience an overload of the senses which could be focused on. You could also draw out the portion where he's made into a pony; I'm certain that would be quite the transformation.

1158151 And there they are again; I can't seem to find out where all these icons are coming from, nor do I know how to create them. Are they just old ones that the site no longer lists as automatic for convenience? Or are they more like Easter eggs, only to be found by those who know where to look, as a symbol of the unsigned covenant between the creators of the site and its users? I'll never know.

Two things for Jexx:

Celestia was taken aback slightly by this decision, since she didn't really expect it. Nonetheless, it's always nice to have a new resident here in Ponyville. If you were willing to take make a big choice like that, she would be there to help you.

I would think that she'd be more likely to accept his decision simply because, as an honorable and benevolent ruler, she would want to keep her promise.

"Well...alright, if you insist. From now on, you shall now be an earth pony. Your name is completely up to you. Are you ready to begin the transformation process?"

Wouldn't she leave the choice up to the POV character? Sure, you as the author may have decided to make him an Earth pony, but I would think it would make more narrative sense for her, being the honorable and benevolent ruler that she is, to give him the the freedom of choice and let him decide on his own to choose the subspecies of pony that you had planned for him to become.

Other than that, it's a good story. I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes.

Do you have the Greasemonkey plugin installed? If you do, you should be able to see the new icons in the "Add comment" section of most of the pages that allow comments, as well as the add/edit blog post page.

1158330 Alas, I use Google Chrome, and cannot install it outside of the Chrome Web Store, which appears to be lacking it.

Ah. I don't use Chrome, so I didn't pay attention to the part on the script install page that says Chrome users may have to install something called "Tampermonkey" first...

Lucky you. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/discord.png

Clopping to 'humanized ponies'?

(Edit) You changed it... how could you...?

trust me

Thats hard considering this is probably a self-insert fic

the bane of all things sacred and harmonic in equestria- clop.
I will do all in my power to end this story

Oh shit. When I read the part where I silently squeed, I did this:
*does high pitched squeal and faints to the floor with wide eyes and smile still on my face*
Love myself some Lunar Goddess! Ha! She thought I was dating Celly.
You, my friend, earn Three Photo Finishes::coolphoto::coolphoto::coolphoto:
Five Scootaloos::scootangel::scootangel::scootangel::scootangel::scootangel:
And an Afternoon Delight.
This is BronyCup here, and I shall now go feed Rainbow Dash. Cheese pizza tonight, so yay!:rainbowdetermined2:

Haven't read shall do tomorrow morning probably. I have Xbox things to do with brony friends. Look foward to reading though! Faved before hand to find easier. (Hope I don't have to remove later. Not a fan of human in equestria for the most part)

You have my attention for now. Beware, for it is flux incarnate.


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