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Wintermist


Writer of long, character-driven smut of astounding filthiness, lesbian mind-control a speciality. Short-Fic Commission Slots Now Closed

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10002478 Clearly, my time away has caused me to go to new extremes.

We start/end chapter 1 with post-coital fucksplosion.
Can't say I'm disappointed.

Goddammit Rainbow Dash indeed.

This was one of the most powerful scenes I've read in a long while. Like... Holy repressed sexuality, AJ! You got my old, perverted heart pumping and here I thought I'd gotten numb to kinky stuff.

This was the best Christmas present I never thought I'd get!:twilightsmile:

Not only was this hot, but wholesome too. Just really good porn with plot.

Great story! It would be great to see a sequel featuring the three mares!

Well that was one of the hottest things I've read in a long while. I love this fic, I love the one who wrote it, I love the one who asked for the prompt I love everything about this. I only wish I was better with words so I could express just how much I love your writing.
(I may also wish I was Applejack in this situation a little to much :ajsmug:)

There is nothing sexier than fully informed consent!

Very, very hot, and I'll admit a part of me wants to see what the full training would have been like. You did a lot of very interesting stuff with these characters that blew even my previous perceptions of your skills out of the water.

This was super hot. I could really see the Applejack/Twilight from FiMC in this. You've clearly got a skill and it's not limited to one story or setting.

I've written clop and it always feels so ... matter of fact. Yours is this passionate sexual experience. I'm very jealous. Thank you for posting this.

Really enjoyed that. Love wholesome BDSM.

fucking amazing stuff!!!

I tried looking for the pics and cant find them. It keeps saying no image found.

My God it's like watching a train wreck in slow motion and not being able to look away.

(this is a compliment btw ^_^)

It’s wonderful, so beautiful, I’m crying now.

I’m totally in love with this spitappledash stuff right now. Every character is so real and so cute. Spitfire is really a hot and great dom, and I can’t believe how wonderful the sub AJ is, so sincere and so lovely. And applejack and rainbow dash’s dynamic are great, even though there’s only a little bit hints. I love that when spitfire is try to protect her girls, she is so nice, I’m in love with her, too.

Well, this was great. You described Applejack magnificently - I adore the idea of her as a broad, masculine-built amazon and you hit the nail on the head with it. The frank discussions and utmost importance of consent made this feel like a window into proper BDSM rather than just porn (not that I would know), and really made for a very fine story. Thank you!

Now all I want is Applejacked being slowly, lovingly hypnotized by Rarity. >_>

Oh my gosh this was amazing on every possible level :rainbowlaugh:

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