Introverted DJ Vinyl Scratch tries to win over a famous cellist while her roommate Lyra tries to figure out where she stands with the candy maker at the mall. It sortof works.
(Humanized) Her DJ career is on the deadlock, Vincenza 'Vinyl' Scratch needs an other job quickly. Thanks to her mother's connection, she founds one in a complete other field than what she's used to: Highschool Teaching!
It's Octavia and Vinyl's wedding day, three of Equestria's princesses will be in attendance, and things couldn't be better for the long-suffering couple. Of course, with it being Octavia's wedding day, it would be stranger if
Before two worlds became one; before one home was made their own; they still had so many possibilities. It was their differences that led them here and kept them together.
I guess I will be the first one to say it. I like this story so far, subject to change of course but this is actually good pacing for a D/s story in the making.
6497284 Thank you! and Yes i wanted something abit more than a one night stand clop fic sorta thing that I often see (especially for a D/S fic, yet to come across one that's not a one shot). Develop a relationship and character for the two as well.
Well that was actually rather sweet. I expected it to be longer and have Octavia be more cruel, but I rather like the route you took. Also a shark plushy? I would have just gone full tilt and given her her pony self, but whatever.
6503195 There will be plenty of pony cameos later but the shark is in reference to some art I have found of shark vinyl. http://www.deviantart.com/art/Vinyl-Shark-508667983 But thank you for enjoying it so far! As for the sweetness D/S relationships in real life (if done/participated in correctly) isn't all crulity and can be rather sweet ^^
6503782 mostly I expected more cruelty because of how Octavia acts, but I didn't expect anything on the level of complete sociopathy or a savage beating that left Vinyl covered in bleeding scars. I just expected Vinyl to be tied down and sparked a bit more than she was.
Later on she will grow abit more comfortable with it (knowing Vinyls limits by then, this is the first time there doing this after all) so you can expect a slightly crueler Octavia in the future. ^^
7029993 maybe delete data: at the very beginning and it will work? That's usually the case for image files, something is unneeded at the beginning or end.
I love it. Sometimes I'm like a little space heater, but the fact that Vinyl is cold after being naked all day it's all the more better I can't wait for the next chapter! I've been following this story for a while now and have been dying in wait for a new chapter! It's full of fluff and I love it!!
I've been in the scene a while, more of a spectator, but I pray for the day I find a Dom as magic as this one. Very beautiful writing, and Vinyl fighting through her issues, Octavia breaking her down and fixing up scarred tissue that, just wonderful. I can't wait to read more, honestly the only fix that actually portrays a Dom Sub relationship in a more... Dominatrix manner rather than the typical BDSM sexual torture you see on here.
This is a good story, or rather is has good potential, but it's riddled with spelling mistakes and find errors. I suggest finding an editor to help polish this story up.
I guess I will be the first one to say it. I like this story so far, subject to change of course but this is actually good pacing for a D/s story in the making.
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Thank you! and Yes i wanted something abit more than a one night stand clop fic sorta thing that I often see (especially for a D/S fic, yet to come across one that's not a one shot). Develop a relationship and character for the two as well.
Well that was actually rather sweet. I expected it to be longer and have Octavia be more cruel, but I rather like the route you took. Also a shark plushy? I would have just gone full tilt and given her her pony self, but whatever.
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There will be plenty of pony cameos later but the shark is in reference to some art I have found of shark vinyl.
http://www.deviantart.com/art/Vinyl-Shark-508667983
But thank you for enjoying it so far!
As for the sweetness D/S relationships in real life (if done/participated in correctly) isn't all crulity and can be rather sweet ^^
6503782 mostly I expected more cruelty because of how Octavia acts, but I didn't expect anything on the level of complete sociopathy or a savage beating that left Vinyl covered in bleeding scars. I just expected Vinyl to be tied down and sparked a bit more than she was.
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Fair enough.
Later on she will grow abit more comfortable with it (knowing Vinyls limits by then, this is the first time there doing this after all) so you can expect a slightly crueler Octavia in the future. ^^
More?
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Soon (hopefully) Ive been racking my head for ideas ^^"
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Thank you
I love it so far. Keep up the great work ^~^
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Holy mother of
brokenImage files.no kidding
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maybe delete data: at the very beginning and it will work? That's usually the case for image files, something is unneeded at the beginning or end.
I love it. Sometimes I'm like a little space heater, but the fact that Vinyl is cold after being naked all day it's all the more better I can't wait for the next chapter! I've been following this story for a while now and have been dying in wait for a new chapter! It's full of fluff and I love it!!
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Thank you im glad you love it so much
Good story so far looking forward to more.
I've been in the scene a while, more of a spectator, but I pray for the day I find a Dom as magic as this one. Very beautiful writing, and Vinyl fighting through her issues, Octavia breaking her down and fixing up scarred tissue that, just wonderful. I can't wait to read more, honestly the only fix that actually portrays a Dom Sub relationship in a more... Dominatrix manner rather than the typical BDSM sexual torture you see on here.
I have heard of that horror movie with the cube maze but have never seen it and don't know it's name. Can someone please inform me of its name.
You have a week to update or else I will give you a bad yelp review. I found a fly in my naked DJ watering a garden.
Interesting start.
Huh, so Octavia does actually know what she's doing. Useful.
Last I checked, there was no Jesus in Equestria.
Same thing.
This is a good story, or rather is has good potential, but it's riddled with spelling mistakes and find errors. I suggest finding an editor to help polish this story up.
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Its honestly just called "Cube"
finish this, it's good!