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That Dino Pony


Im a pony loving dinosaur- wait i got that backwards didn't I?

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I guess I will be the first one to say it. I like this story so far, subject to change of course but this is actually good pacing for a D/s story in the making.

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Thank you! and Yes i wanted something abit more than a one night stand clop fic sorta thing that I often see (especially for a D/S fic, yet to come across one that's not a one shot). Develop a relationship and character for the two as well.

Well that was actually rather sweet. I expected it to be longer and have Octavia be more cruel, but I rather like the route you took. Also a shark plushy? I would have just gone full tilt and given her her pony self, but whatever.

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There will be plenty of pony cameos later but the shark is in reference to some art I have found of shark vinyl.
http://www.deviantart.com/art/Vinyl-Shark-508667983
But thank you for enjoying it so far!
As for the sweetness D/S relationships in real life (if done/participated in correctly) isn't all crulity and can be rather sweet ^^

6503782 mostly I expected more cruelty because of how Octavia acts, but I didn't expect anything on the level of complete sociopathy or a savage beating that left Vinyl covered in bleeding scars. I just expected Vinyl to be tied down and sparked a bit more than she was.

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Fair enough.

Later on she will grow abit more comfortable with it (knowing Vinyls limits by then, this is the first time there doing this after all) so you can expect a slightly crueler Octavia in the future. ^^

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Soon (hopefully) Ive been racking my head for ideas ^^"

I love it so far. Keep up the great work ^~^

Comment posted by Osiris Melody deleted Mar 15th, 2016

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maybe delete data: at the very beginning and it will work? That's usually the case for image files, something is unneeded at the beginning or end.

I love it. Sometimes I'm like a little space heater, but the fact that Vinyl is cold after being naked all day it's all the more better :twilightsmile: I can't wait for the next chapter! I've been following this story for a while now and have been dying in wait for a new chapter! It's full of fluff and I love it!!

Good story so far looking forward to more.

I've been in the scene a while, more of a spectator, but I pray for the day I find a Dom as magic as this one. Very beautiful writing, and Vinyl fighting through her issues, Octavia breaking her down and fixing up scarred tissue that, just wonderful. I can't wait to read more, honestly the only fix that actually portrays a Dom Sub relationship in a more... Dominatrix manner rather than the typical BDSM sexual torture you see on here.

I have heard of that horror movie with the cube maze but have never seen it and don't know it's name. Can someone please inform me of its name.

You have a week to update or else I will give you a bad yelp review. I found a fly in my naked DJ watering a garden.:pinkiehappy:

Huh, so Octavia does actually know what she's doing. Useful.

Jesus fuck

Last I checked, there was no Jesus in Equestria.

Christ

Same thing.

This is a good story, or rather is has good potential, but it's riddled with spelling mistakes and find errors. I suggest finding an editor to help polish this story up.

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