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overlord-flinx


I'm 40% jokes, 30% serious, and 20% romance. The Last 10%? You tell me. Ko-fi: https://ko-fi.com/overlord_flinx

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This story is a sequel to If I Could Rearrange The Alphabet...


A year before Vinyl Scratch and Octavia moved in together, they went on a "couple's vacation". There was arguing, bickering, loving, and caring. What else would you come to expect from two deeply in love women? Even before they knew they were truly in love... This time together on their vacation perhaps would define their relationship and the tribulations it held.

Prequel to If I Could Rearrange The Alphabet...

Humanized ponies; for your own future information.

A story told primarily in first person and third person alternating with cues.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 87 )

The Santa part was priceless, but the whole-chapter-in-italics just hurts my eyes. Faved, liked, and... FIR- and I can't really say that.

Please tell me you've seen this?: :trollestia:

I don't plan on reading this, at least not until i read its sequel/the main story. But I'm sure it's well written, and I'm not gonna down vote it or anything. I just felt like I had to leave that video there. Oh and I enjoyed your pirate rules quick fic. Have a great day! :eeyup:

Tavi, let me answer your three Santa questions.

Vinyl.
Vinyl.
Any grown man who can get away with it without looking like a pervert. I mean, really Tavi, with a figurlike yours, ANY man would want you to ssit on his lap.

:yay: Hooray for more shenanigans of the Octavia Scratch persuasion!

Alright, off to a great start! Please continue this work of art! :twilightsmile:

Comment posted by JoeReads deleted Oct 26th, 2013

Besides, only Santa would allow a grown woman like me sit in his lap in public.

this line made me laught way to hard :P

I hate the first person. but the idea looks good

Besides, only Santa would allow a grown woman like me to sit in his lap in public.

Or, well, someone who would want to get near that glorious body of yours? :derpytongue2:

Also, nice beginning and, oh god, I can't wait for Octavia to finally bust Vinyl when she's putting presents under the tree :rainbowlaugh: It will lead to one of two things.

1 - Octavia gets so pissed it ends in angry sex.
2 - Octavia gets so pissed that she beats the snot out of Vinyl and runs crying into her room.

I really like the idea. Just one problem:

It's beginning to look a lot like Hearth's Warm~~~!

I LOVE Hearth's Warm

Hearths Warm

Warm

Dunno what that is, but it annoyed me. It's hearth's warMING. other than that, this was amazing.

3410912 "Warming" has too many syllables and would sound awkward when singing in tune with "It's beginning to look a lot like Christmas". By the way you say "Hearth's Warm" isn't a thing, neither is "x-mas".

3411895 Touché, my good sir. Touché.
Also, my apologies if I came across as arrogant/whiny. I had just woken up, needed food, and also needed to get out of my house. Which is to say, I made my comment more brutally than I intended it to sound.

I read the first chapter of this before I realized that it was a prequel to a story that's already done. So despite how good this is, I'm going to hold off on reading anymore until after I finish the completed story. Weird, maybe, but I'm impatient. Regardless, this is getting a fave and a like from me.

Comment posted by guy12389 deleted Nov 2nd, 2013

nice can't wait for next update this fic has so much potential can't wait to see what ya do with it all^^.:heart::heart:

not bad, but a little short for a chapter where all they really did was listen to the radio

The whole radio segment was cute. Short, but sweet.

hmm i wonder if shy in that world always sounds so wise and humble:trixieshiftright:... still great chapter can't wait for more :yay:

Wonderful job so far! Can't wait for more :pinkiehappy:

LOL OMG that was hilarious heh Jewish vinyl keep up the good work :pinkiehappy: :derpytongue2: :yay:

Lol, she did all that and she's a Jew :rainbowlaugh:

That was awesome :pinkiehappy:

If you were trying to refer to Rudolph the red nosed raindeer, it's not Rudolf but Rudolph. If you're not, then don't mind me at all.

The fact that Tavi believes in Santa still mind boggles me and almost takes away from the story in my opinion. It's funny don't get me wrong, but it's distracting a bit for me.

Can't wait for the next one!

3618679 It's a human condition. Some people simply believe in the unbelievable despite how firm they are in reality.

Cyb

Jewish Vinyl? My compliments to the author.

OMG Vinyl killed me bro LOLOLOLOL pls more chapters:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::heart:

Well I enjoyed this chapter!:pinkiehappy: But I do want to know what Tavi's christmas wish was. I mean, the same wish since she was ten? Thats got to be important!
~GalaxyDust:heart:

Of all the things I thought the banana would've been used for....:trixieshiftright:
This was not one of them...

Wait a moment, why isn't Hasbro making a Dash and Shy talk show for the Hub Network yet? It should have happened by now! This is just such a great idea!

That... Is the best idea anyone could use a banana for. I need to try that...

I really just blend into the background sometimes. People hardly notice me at all. And the people that do? Well, they really kinda take a liking to me

That could not be more perfect :rainbowlaugh:

3785897 I only just got that reference. Thank you, random user of the Internet. Thank you.

Uh oh. Vinyl's going to get jealous...

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