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Tofazz


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Can words hurt more than actions?

Can what has been said be undone?

After a fight with her mother, Dinky finds an old diary.
As she reads it, she finds out more about her mother's past.

Authors note: This is a follow-up to A Love Like no Other, but you don't have to have read it to enjoy this one.

Thanks to Arbarano for helping me edit it, and getting rid of those pesky grammar errors.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 32 )

Good God, you deserve the featured tab.

Featured, I predict this will be. :pinkiecrazy:

Because this is AS GOOD as my little dashie. :rainbowderp:

Which is saying a lot. :yay::yay::yay:

While I did not cry, I was effected with "emotion" and "sadness". We do not know what those are.

4.4 out of five.

Best story i have read yet i cryed all the way through :fluttercry:

GIVE THIS MAN THE MEDAL HE DESERVES!!!!!

:fluttershyouch::fluttershysad::fluttercry: I have too many feels at the moment. Be right back...

:fluttercry:Fantastic and absolutely brilliant! This stunning piece of fan fiction is better than My Little Dashie, and I mean that with every fiber of my being.

Wow.....:fluttercry:

Well done....

*22 likes

*clicks like button

*24 likes

YES! Fimfiction finally got the number of thumbs I have right!

Manly tears were shed. This was beautiful! :raritycry:

How can something so heart-breaking be SOOOOO awesome! :raritycry::fluttercry::raritydespair:

Excuse me for a moment, my eyes seem to be leaking. I just don't know what went wrong! :applecry:

Pretty well done. The only suggestion I have is to reinforce a bit of description the whole way through.

Great fic.

1099959 1100006 I'm glad the two of you liked my story, and think it deserves the feature tab. Means alot. :twilightsmile:

1100271110047411008151101013 Thank you all for the kind words. I'm really happy people like my story. :yay:

1101035 Could you please be kind enough to point out those small mistakes? And I'm really glad you liked it. :twilightsmile:

11011381101414 110156511016111101630 I'm really glad you fine folks liked it. :twilightsmile:

1101998 Thank you, glad you liked it. :yay:

Cheers all, This got recieved way better than I imagined it would.

It's stories like this that make me want to see Dinky become one of the Cutie Mark Crusaders. Hanging around with the town's resident superheroes would certainly silence all the bullies (except Diamond Tiara, who's so stupidly self-confident that she'd probably diss the Princesses).

1102502 okay, every quotation you've made, like when a character speaks, should be on a new line...
that's pretty much all I saw right away.

1105888
Well... that's almost right, that is only necessary when a 'new' character speaks.
So having something to empower the feelings you want to portray in that sentence is not wrong. as long as the emotions you portray comes belongs to the same person/pony that's speaking on that line.

If you follow that rule in a staccato way, it might end up being messy after a bit. some bit's might come off out of context.

But I do thank you for taking the time to share your thoughts. :twilightsmile:

Cheers!

I just don't know what went wrong. I thought for sure you'd get featured.:raritydespair:

1171223
Hehe, I hoped so aswell, especially after seing the comments. :twilightsmile:
But not everything can go as planned, but I do thank you for your support.

Cheers!

I'm not one for short stories but this was a masterpeice

1209805 Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. :twilightsmile:

i enjoy that this has no dislikes at all lets keep it that way

1341552 Thank you kindly good sir, glad you liked it. :twilightsmile:

oh god that hit me right in the feels..... also MOAR

Bro.

Feels.

That was unfortunately fortunate of me to come across such a short sad story.

*sobs*

Well done.

I cried.... so much:fluttercry:

Beautifully written with tons of emotions.

Sob..... sniff...... boohoo.... crying sounds..... dude I think I died from emotion overload.....yap I can see my dead body hunched over the computer.

Hey.
This was so good. Scribbler of Scribbler Productions did a Pony Tales Fanfic Reading of this.

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