Love can be so many things, love for a brother or a friend.
Ditzy did not recieve anything like that growing up.
She has been alone all her life, except for one pony.
That showed her that it is one kind of love like no other.
Authors note: This story is the start of many, many Ditzy/Dinky fics I have planned. I hope you enjoy.
To read the seuqel, please follow the link or go to my page. I Wish You Could
For a reading of this story, follow this link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7QXwqtXWBx4&feature=g-u-u
Chapters (1)
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I swear, you need WAY more views than this.
Nice job!
-Digit
700252 Thanks mate, Glad you liked it.
All my tears man, ALL OF THEM.
But seriously this was very tight (well organized with no words waste or any filler) and it really I felt got to the heart of what 'Derpy' (and people who are 'different') have to deal with. The ending and the cute mark meaning was really good.
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Thanks, I'm really glad you liked it.
You've weaved a lovely narrative, though I did catch one technical error...
I eventually decided to leave it be, the mark on my flank were apparently useless, much like me.
'Were' should be 'was'. Now let's move onto the story!
I really love the message that you've brought out here. At first I was a little leery that you were going into the usual cliche angst that Derpy seemed to be so often put into, but that was far from the case. While the narrative is good, there were times where it didn't feel as if I was hearing Derpy, but an author trying to decide what she would sound like, you know? Doing a first person narrative can be tediously difficult because you still want to retain the character as well as provide for a crisp environment to make it all seem real. There were times in this story where you achieved that, and there were times where you didn't. Even so, this is still a very well done piece. I'm just being hyper critical.
Chapeau bas, Monsieur!
That was beautiful!
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Thank you, I'm really glad you liked it.
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I'm glad you liked it Gingernut, and you know what they say, practice makes perfect.
Not sure if I'm going to do one more narrative story in the near future. but what you said is taken in as a mental note.
704542 thank you.
I hope to do some stories of this kind later.
Hopefully you will like those aswell.
i didnt shed a manly tear, no, but i felt warm inside when my life has grown so cold
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I'm glad to hear that.
Makes me sad that you feel like that about your life.
It will hopefully turn around soon.
I can only think of one word that describes how this story makes me feel... D'AWWW!
Best sad author, right here!
After I read this story, you made me optimistic about life again.
Thank you.
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I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for the Favorite.
Remember, when you are sad, it's just life's way of telling you something good is coming around the corner.
Cheers!
Beautiful work.
1551357 Thank you, glad you enjoyed my work, and thank you kindly or the favorite, mighty appreciated.
Cheers!
Hey Tofazz,
We're working on a pre-record for this as we speak. Should be up on our channel pretty soon
Awesome stories in this series. We'll post the two follow-up stories pre-recorded as well
Cheers,
The Living Library Player Society
1762027 Sounds awesome.
I'll be looking forward to hear it.
Cheers!
This is beautiful, really beautiful
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Very beautiful story.