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MrWriterWriter


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I can only recall One other story here at FIM Fiction where the human protagonist had that disability.
Bravo. Following.

Been awhile since I've seen a mute mc in a fimifc.

You put (2nd person PoV) in the description, instead of just putting the Second Person tag into the actual tag list.

You really have me interested in what's next. I'm keeping track of this story.

Oral FROM Luna, to get her acquainted with the size. Anything goes after that.

Oral from both. Luna gets acquainted with his size and he gets Luna exited for the main course.

Luna looks like she likes it up the butt

Vaginal. The princess asked to be used like a pleasure toy, it's only proper that we comply.

I vote vaginal

vaginal than anal

I vote for anal.

Anal, let's be real here, she was made for it.

I see a lot of people want to go straight for anal. I don't think it should be an immediate thing. Also, it'd be funny if buttsex wasn't invented/discovered before Luna went to the moon, and she gets really confused and scared when Hue tries to initiate. Maybe Celly has to explain the innovations in lovemaking over the past millennium to Luna.

Ancient Pegasopolis looks like it was based on Ancient Greece, so there was probably plenty of buttsex in the past of the actual show, but there doesn't have to have been in this one.

I vote 69 then after that vaginal.

vaginal then anal

nice work on all chapters

i hope there is a sequel

Thank you for the story. I hope there will be a continuation.

You weren't much of a conversationalist anyway, but you did throw in the occasional gesture that she figured out how to interpret.

You'd think ponies would have some sort of a sign language, or something...

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When they have magic to grant mute ponies the gift of speech, I doubt they'd have the need to develop Sign Language in the first place.

A sequal with Hue having sex with other Royals would be nice. Like Cadence, Chrysalis, Ember and Novo.

And that's a big time nope from me.

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