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Great story!
Is there going to be stories in this series?
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Yes. This is part five and it is still a continuing series.
Twice the love=double the fun!
I’m over the moon
with all the love and tenderness that is shown throughout this installment. Celly’s & Everglade’s conversation at lunch gives me high hopes for the thruple’s future together. Including the hope I mentioned in a previous installment that in a few years they could be more open about their polyamorous relationship. Heck, folks can just assume they’re a “V” and only the handful that Luna mentioned earlier would know the truth. Those very few will probably be happy for them in fact. Speaking of “being happy for them”; I love that it’s been pointed out that Luna is happy for Celestia as is that Celestia is happy for Luna regarding Everglade. The compersion certainly helps the developing relationship they have. It’s one of the aspects of I love about the series. This is also something exemplified in "W&S:O&U" which I loved as well by the way.
I loved the erotic & comfy way Luna expressed her confession. I actually “awww’d” at her lines about the blue box and all her intentions behind it. I had noticed they hadn’t done this yet in all their time together which made this entire scene all the more significant. The joy Celestia has for them. Everglade confirming that his feelings for Luna are just as strong as those he feels for Celestia. It all seals and strengthens the bond they all now share and the last conversation between Celestia & Luna highlighting how much more they’ve all become to each other.
The sex scenes were superb as always. They'll be replaying in my mind for weeks if not months to come. That's matched only by the romance weaved through the series. A series which has quickly become one of the few I’ve become passionate about. Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading the next story.
Before I forget, the only typo that jumped out at me was:
“Feels like it,” Everglade looked...
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Thank you, I'm glad the series is still holding up with regards to emotional and erotic content. Thanks for the typo catch too, I actually laughed out loud at that one, I can't believe I didn't even notice that in proof-read. My OC's are trying to cross over onto one another.