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Adorable! I've been so excited for this story!
I enjoyed reading this.
I was hoping that Rarity was going to have butterfly wings during the story.
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Heh, sorry. I didn’t really think about that when titling and stuff. Hope you still enjoyed it though
This needs a sequel
Short, sweet, yet full of personality, from Rarity's loving generosity to Rainbow's more vulnerable side, a brevity stretched with emotion and character. I loved every moment.
Especially that bit where Rarity tasted the Rainbow.
My only criticism is that while you managed to contain so much in so little, the potential of this shipping in this universe feels deserving of much more. I would urge both you and Manifest to correct this. Pretty please. With cherries.
Pretty good. But why is Rainbow calling her mom
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Because Rarity as a mommy-dom is awesome