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Saiyan of the North Star


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9684393
KO only by one cup. I do bust sizes is because of the other fan arts of the Equestria Girls characters with bigger bust and I love them!

9684395
Im not complaining.
But i was hoping to see the Dazzlings stands.

9684398
KO they’ll get their own Stand, all I can tell is they’ getting the “point” of it. Hehe.

9684513
That has to be the most painful ways to obtain a stand ever.

9684518
I like Shadow's Mother she like a blend of Holly and Tomoko.

9684522
KO yep and her appearance is the inspiration of a anime character from Horizon in the Middle of Nowhere. Still haven’t thought of a name though.

Hmm, a few spelling errors here and there, Sonata's last name is "Dusk", but interesting nonetheless. You also forgot Giorno in the dreamscape scene. And big-tittied Equestria Girls, too.

9686322
KO thanks for pointing that out, I’ll work on them soon and hope you enjoy the story!

Wonder who else will show up in this fic?

9710627
KO just some other characters of the Equestria Girls series.

9710671
Like who? (aside from the characters mentioned in the tags above)

“I’m Sonata Duck and these are my sisters, Adagio Dazzle and Aria Blaze.” Sonata happily introduced herself and her sisters.

Yare yare daze.

“Shining Diamond!” A teenage boy with a Pompadour (hairstyle) shouted with a pink shining phantom warrior.

It's actually Crazy Diamond, in both the English and Japanese dubs. The Crunchyroll subtitles only used Shining Diamond because of copyright laws.

“Stone Ocean!” A young woman charged with a blue phantom warrior and strings.

Stone Ocean is the name of Jolyne's season. Her Stand is named Stone Free, because she wants to be freed from the stone ocean.

9712083
KO I watched an English dub for Josuke’s Stand and it said Shining Diamond.

9712281
Tch.

Well, it was Crazy Diamond in the original version.

And I notice you didn't do jack shit about the other typos I pointed out. That is to me what hair insults are to Josuke.

9712294
KO I promise I’ll do better on the next chapter and I’m waiting for the anime of part 6 to see how they will say Jolyne’s Stand in English dub.

9712322
Why are you so hung up on the dub?

The reason they have to change the names of some Stands is because they have to work around copyright laws.

You don't have to worry about that. You're free to use the names Araki originally came up with for them.

Also, you still haven't fixed the part where Sonata Dusk called herself Sonata Duck. That is raising so many red flags about how much you actually read my first comment.

9712679
KO fix the name and I like the English dub better on the anime.

9684395
So basically you think high school girls should have bigger boobs, which you specifically mention within your story?

9713916
KO we all have fantasies about our favorite female characters having big boobs, like the other stories.

I wonder what other characters will get Stands?
Like I wonder would any of the Rainbooms or Spike get a Stand?

9839660
How much later? :0

Hoping Spike can get to kick some ass than well.. being there as a prop due to being a dog than a human(that's all I can remember how it goes for him in EQG. Usually he's just there like a prop)

Another interesting chapter and liked the bit with Spike's interaction with Shadow there
I hope Spike would get his own stand eventually.

Wonder whats Party Demon Pink's Stand stats are? I am a bit surprised one of the Rainbooms already has a Stand. Nice

10211471
Ok then.

Sorry if I keep mentioning about hoping Spike gets some power in your stories and such.
It just felt like he's being left out if the others gets powers and such but he doesn't.

With the Dazzlings baffled with how Stand Users are immune to their mind control while dealing with the Rainbooms who are immune too due to having Equestrian magic, wonder how they react to the fact Spike is immune too? Pretty sure in the show he was clearly within their range but didn't appear to fall under the spell too and sadly they didn't explain why Spike is immune too. Would have love to see why Spike was immune to the Dazzling's mind control too.

Merry Christmas.

Wonder how many enemy Stand users might pop up here?

When you cued the Dragon Ball music... I heard ultra instinct in my head.
I don't know why.

“(Strange, the moment I touch Flash’s hand it was like I feel the same energy I have. Could it be he’s a Stand User too?)” Shadow thought asked himself but decided to worry about that later and went off to the Principal’s office.

GOD NO PLEASE NO

awesome chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

A nice chapter I see.

I hope Spike would be able to do stuff than just fetching someone honestly.

“Just a doggy instinct, I guess.” Spike shrugged.

Given how dogs usually die horribly in a Jojo setting, Spike should really be wishing he is human instead as a dog honestly.
Like really, being a dog is probably going to be a death sentence in Jojo. So the universe thinking its funny to reduce Spike to a pet dog really takes a dire turn with Spike being at risk there.

Maybe if Spike gets a Stand, a "side-effect" of having it causes him to turn human at will when in the human-world?

“(If I can make the Rainbooms late for the final room, Trixie will have her rightful place in the final round and win the Battle of the Band! And maybe that Shadow guy will date me too.)” Trixie thought planned smirking.

Nope! You get a PUNCH in the face for that stunt!

“Not that I care about that guy or anything, but I think he’ll look at me more than you.” Aria grinned pumping up her breasts causing them to bounce.

Ha! Hypocrite!

“Soon, we will get what we wanted and no one, not the Rainbooms or those Stand Users can stop us!” Adagio declared.

Bitch, please!!!!!! You will regret it! Because, MOST of the Stand Users in the Series can run circles around you!

“I know, which is why we’ll play along with him as he proven to be a good ally so far. Perhaps we may find a way to make the Stand Users become affective to our power.” Adagio said thinking of a certain in mind.

I f****** doubt that it will work. Especially, trying to betray a Evil Stand User Organization. Which is a TERRIBLE idea for your well being, along with your sisters. :facehoof:

“Will you two knock it off! We have been waiting YEARS ever since we were banished to this word to finally get our full power back and take this world for ourselves, the last thing we need is one guy making us go into a pointless fight!” Adagio lectured.

“But I think Shadow definitely think I’m sexier than both of you combined.” Adagio bragged a little faster.

See!!!! Another Hypocrite!!!! Stop trying to deny yourself. Your not fooling us!


Edit: The reason I deleted my comment at the top? Is because I somehow, accidentally repeated the same sentences in here?

Comment posted by OP Omni God-Emperor Doom deleted May 8th, 2021

Hope to see what happens next there.
Such as for Spike there too.

Why? Why does Flash or any of the Equestria Girls characters have stands?

When the Dazzlings are defeated, are you planning on having them join the school, or are you perhaps planning to have the Dazzlings run from the school and go on their musical tours in their van, and Jojo going with them and the 4 of them having wacky adventures together in between and during their concerts?

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