Following an attack on the Friendship Festival, Equestria finds itself under siege from enemies both within and without their dimension. Twilight and her friends, as well as allies from home and abroad, must find a way to stop the attack and restore peace to Equestria.
This idea came to me after watching the movie and seeing crossover potential all over the darn place.
Written to celebrate the 1st anniversary of MLP The Movie.
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I can't wait for to see how this goes.So far.I like it.
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Nice to hear. I felt that the film needed a tiny bit of editing to make it work a bit smoother. Figured out what the characters are from?
Ouch. That's a lot of downvotes.
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Sorry, needs to be a bit more specific than that. And you get no marks for MLP characters. What on Earth do you mean by Terminal Cancer?
I mean that you need to name each character (or machine) and name which game or film they are from.
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Which is one of the exact problems of this story, one too many crossovers. Well, that and you assuming you can write better than professionally paid writers which is what this sorta screams in a way. What you've basically done is toss everything you can into a blender, hope it comes out as a coherent story all the while assuming you know better than Hasbro, at least that what this comes off to me as.
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I've only got one crossover thus far!
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If you're not so keen on this one, may I suggest you try one of my other stories?
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Yes, thus far. But you say yourself you plan to add many more.
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It's only just started rolling, so if you could save the criticism for when the story's progressed a bit, I would appreciate it.
9214480 My apologies, I'll retract my statement.
I'll save it for when Fortnite is added.
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Good grief.
9214647 Thanks for the reminder.
And Jojo too.
>fix-fic
>call of duty
>third story in a line of seemingly unrelated fics
>holy shit call of fucking duty what is this 2013
Yea I don't see how this can go wrong at all.
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I mean it's readable, I guess. That's the barest minimun I can give this and even then it should be a given that you can write something good.
But you know, that doesn't make the story itself good. Because Call of fucking Duty which hasn't been good since Black Ops 2. I mean I guess you can write what you want, I can't stop you... But maybe reconsider.
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In all fairness, it was professional writers that gave us Transformers: Revenge of the Fallen.
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I wouldn't go that far, not with Bay at the helm.
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Well what exactly makes a Hollywood script/screen writer qualify as being a professional in their field?
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Oh, I'm sure they were professionals but Bay is a known dictator. He probably forced them to write such low-bar crap.
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Not yet,but working on it.
I saw all the down votes so I'm keeping an eye on this story now.
Da fuk just happened? XD oh man.now.im.really interested in this!
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I would NEVER put Jojo in a story. I can't stand it.
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You've guessed at least one part correctly. I would like to point out that this is actually the FOURTH story in the line. Anon-a-Miss takes place midway through another of my stories (Railway Adventure), and Fireman Sam follows on from Railway Adventure. Where this fits in, you'll have to wait and see.
I appreciate that this is not Shakespeare, but I am trying. I would not write garbage on purpose.
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Thank you. At points it felt like the MLP movie had a load of random ideas hurled into a blender.
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Bay is pretty awful. Thank heaven he isn't directing Bumblebee.
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It's a mystery. ANTHROPOLOGY!
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Let's go! I'm as hyped about this as I was for the Michael bay transformers movies (which sucked.)
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Oh.
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Shit... I meant I'm MORE hyped for this than... Oh god I'm sorry I was studying for PSAT and I didn't reread my comment! D:
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It's OK.
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Are you sure!? D: I mean I was hyped for the movies (until I watched them) but still.... AGH! Dishonor on me! Dishonor on my cow! Dishonor on my whole family!
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I'm afraid I don't understand what you're trying to say.
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What I mean is I'm really hyped to see where this story goes!
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Well I hope you enjoy!
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Yeah! <3 I bet I will!
Awesome!!
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Hey, thank you! Don't forget to upvote!
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upvote?
Why so many down votes?
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People who have decided the concept is rubbish, in spite of the fact I've barely started the story.
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To counteract the constant negativity surrounding this story.
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oh
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Some people clearly just hate anything involving crossovers. If you're reading this, HCLegend, AW was a good game!
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yes
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Hope you enjoyed the chapter!
Why?
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Why what? One word comments are not helpful. Spot the reference in here?
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Crossovers are already a difficult thing to pull off, but Call of Duty? To say nothing of the dialogue, the characterisation, or the plot progression. This reads like something from the bad old days of ff.net.
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It won't all be CoD, I can assure you. And I have the disadvantage of working from the plot of the movie. All I am doing is something similar to Song of the Spheres. Glad to here it brought back happy memories!