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milesprower06


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Great story so far :)

Very good story, keep it up ;)

I wanted to go with a cropped version of a NSFW image, but according to the rules, that's forbidden and well, honestly, I've seen quite a few stories that break that rule.

What rule is being broken? As long as the version you post is not explicit, and you don't directly link to the explicit version, I don't see the problem.

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It just said cropped versions of explicit images.

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It says that's borderline. Crop heavily and it should be fine.
Of course, it depends on your starting image as to how heavily you can crop while keeping the important parts of the image.

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Yeah, not sure I could make it work.

You know I love this ship! 😉 I'm excited to see where you take it!

When I first saw this in new stories section & thought "ooo someone new (i'm talking about in writing a gallus x sandbar fic.) and omg yes!''
I had to track this one instantly...well you deserve it!
btw love your username and i'm #56 with the like/thumbs up.

I'm actually really liking this so far.

i need more!

Oh yeah! Best ship by far.

Lovely story, well paced and written. Can't wait to read more

Snuggles are demanded. Snuggles for the snuggle-gods!

Yes, yes! This is getting better with each chapter!

This seems interesting. Looking forward to seeing more

Read this chapter a few days ago and didn't leave a comment.
my thoughts - omg...gah! stop being so cute and adorable!

Aw this so adorable ;3 ^~^

i hope she put a box of rubbers for them on a bed for them both

I have my doubts that Silverstream's necklace would allow Gallus to turn into anything but a sea creature. But what do I know, this isn't my story.

The mailpony that delivered the royal mail was not Derpy.

You have committed blasphemy. Congratulations. 😉

gotta say, even though this isn't my favorite ship for either of them, you're quickly making it a close second, keep it up!

Best couple ever!

"I was thinking about perhaps providing them with some privacy here at the castle if they want to get as close as couples usually do on Hearts and Hooves night."

This one sentence halted my reading for a good five minutes and made me consider if age-of-consent was a thing in equestria, what age horses reach maturity, and a few other relevant things. So thanks for that, I guess. (It was a good chapter, though)

Oh, looking forward to the next chapter!

I LOVE that Grubber is the Chef, thats awesome

Looking forward for more ^^

So good! 🏅 10/10 would fap again. Keep up the great work!

Doing a great job with this!

I really like the cute pictures at the end of every chapter.

Nice touch!

"Well, you see... I... I think, maybe, that one of my friends might be... Attracted to me ."

I didn't expect him to say that, well played

"More than likely, a mixture of both. So I believe you and I are due for tea?" Cadance asked as Twilight strapped on her saddlebags.

Haven't y'all had enough tea?

Wow, Sandbar really just dove in huh? So brave

Comment posted by Sirius16 deleted Oct 9th, 2018

Love this story so much, and can't wait for an update. Kinda goin through this myself, except i haven't acted on my feelings yet. I've been friends with this guy since 6th grade, and its kinda turned into a bit more than just friendship. At least for me. I wanna tell him how i feel, but im not sure how he'd react.... or if he likes me the way i like him. I know he's bi, so theres no question on whether hes into guys or not, but i get so nervous whenever i wanna ask him. I have no idea what to do at this point tbh.

"Ahhh... Should I get the lube?" Gallus asked as Sandbar slowly withdrew his tongue.

Yes. Always get the lube. Unless you're being a colossal anus, always get the lube. When you think you've used enough, add some more.

you think you could use some of my gallbar art in this story? https://derpibooru.org/profiles/ma3a my two most recent images were my first two in source filmmaker

"Yona not sure. Something about 'round four'."

Oh my...

This is cute. Even though the show gave us more reasons to ship Gallus and Silver Stream. I still ship the fuck out of these boys. Doing a great job.

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Go for it. If it's what you feel is right you should go for it.

Oh.... Oh my.... That ending....

I love Fizzle's response.

The last two chapters were a very good ending.

You didn't say how many guests :rainbowlaugh: Loopholes!

my reactions to the last two chapters...so it was tempest (not using her real name, for it sounds stupid.) no offense to you as the author, use whatever you're comfortable with!
also didn't know all four girls were listening in, it was only yona & smolder listening to gallus and sandbar going at it on chapter 7! or i'm wrong and misread?
Congrats on your first m/m story!

I had to check that I read the story title right just now... I thought of was reading Letters From A Disgruntled Friendship Student instead of Matters of the Heart cause of the end scene

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You misread:

crouching directly next to Yona in the dimly lit hallway, whose right ear and braid was pressed firmly against the closed bedroom door, as the other three got as close as they could.

It's not quite my first M/M story; the first I've seen through to completion. I'm pretty much done writing OC stories after the ratings my last one got.

Thanks for reading, and we'll agree to disagree on Fizzlepop Berrytwist.

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Ha! Certainly something you and I have plenty of practice with.

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