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Parker


Brony. Gay Brony. Gay Brony sailing the Gallbar ship (and others) until death do us part. Come follow my random gay self on Twitter: https://twitter.com/ParkerPenpony

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Sandbar heard Gallus whisper “love you” softly as he settled down. The stallion leaned his head to the side, careful not to dislodge the griffon, and kissed him on the forehead.

Intense d'awwww-ing.

love it, you already know i’m a sucker for smolcellus

really like the whole vibe of this so far, can’t wait to see where it goes—i love a nice blend of shipping and adventure

Definitely hyped for more of this.

I didnt know that involuntary voyeur got a sequel so when I heard I immediately read both chapters that we have and let me tell you it is already looking REALLY interesting... also does the lovers exchange in involuntary voyeur technically count as a proposal? because if so I hope we see sandbar and gallus get married

I remember reading the original story a while back, and then I saw it on the front page again. Saw it had chapters I hadn't read yet, so I reread the whole thing and found out it had a sequel! These first two chapters have thoroughly intrigued me, so I'm earnestly awaiting to see where this one is going to go! Like Semillion said, I really like the blend of adventure and shipping, and of course GallBar is an incredible couple. Hope to see more soon!

I legitimately wonder. Does heterosexuality exist in this universe? Because it seems like every character is single, has children, or is gay. Hell, I wouldn’t be surprised if the parents of all of these characters were bisexual and in open marriages

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That's a valid question, as we've run into a lot of gay characters. Here's my multi-pronged response:
A) I'm gay and love reading about gay characters.
B) So few mainstream gay characters even exist. Like, I went the majority of life never having a positive gay character on TV. And I always wanted to see gay characters.
C) It's my universe, soooooo teh gay.
D) Plenty of characters in this universe are straight... they just don't get the same screentime. (See A-C.) If anyone is really interested, I suppose I could make a grand list of character's orientations for my universe.

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Don’t get me wrong. I like seeing works with a lot of gay characters. It just always seems weird to me when a setting is still treated as though it’s heteronormative even though most of the characters happen to be gay by sheer coincidence. Morenatsu is probably the most egregious example I can think of. I guess what I mean is that it seems a little hard to buy that a group of characters would come together in a heteronormative society who all just happen to be gay with no other extended circumstances that could lead to that.
Still, it’s just a nitpick. I really enjoy this story otherwise

I wonder how frequently this story will be updated because the first 2 chapters have gotten me excited for the rest

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I'm sincerely hoping to get at least one chapter published each week. Glad you're enjoying!

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I always eagerly await new chapters.... Also while involuntary voyeur was nice and sweet/raunchy, this one looks to be that plus a little bit of a horror element(the nightmares plaguing our protagonists)... Also are we ever going to know about the friendship quest at the end of involuntary voyeur? What was that all about? There are so many loose ends in the first story (the friendship quest, the dildo sandbar bought and if gallus ever found it, the marriage ceremony that may or may not happen innthis story{the lovers exchange in the first story was essentially a marriage proposal/acceptance}) i hope this story resolves the loose ends

wonderful chapter! good to see gallus and sandbar found a solution for their lack of lubricant

Fimfiction really did me dirty on this one, I didn't even get a notification for this update and I've been dying for one ever since the last chapter!

Hot smut, more intrigue into the villain, and I like where you're taking this with the whole Luna angle. Can't wait for more :heart:

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Ooh! I will say though, that it'd be nice to ground Ocellus and Smolder more. Descriptions of where they are, where they're walking to, etc. Still, pretty good stuff.

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Totally valid point. Sorry the update was hidden 😭
Thanks for the feedback!

He had a feeling even paying for a small room would have cost him a wing and a claw.

I see what you did there...

I was correct in assuming that the dream stuff would turn out cool––can't wait for more.

I'm a fan of your Luna, as well. I think you have an interesting grasp on her.

Cant wait for next chapter... I hope next chapter contains more pony on gryphon sexiness

Another great chapter! I love the mix of fun and anxiety.

aaaaw! nice wholesome dream striding and talk of marriage, wonderful chapter I love it, cant wait for more!

There's something that really gets me hard with the way you write masturbation, it's really hot. Glad you were able to get a chapter out this week!

I love this story! you always know how to pour so much emotion into sex and write it in pretty hot ways!

I just joined the ride, read I.V. and this one is coming along just as nicely. Can't wait for the next one!

I am thoroughly impressed with how this story's been progressing. The pacing is great, and the plot is very interesting. Characters are expertly written, too. Dying to see more!

I am loving this so far.

*snickers* Interesting ending to the chapter, yes... poor Gallus.

Is the sex skippable in this story?

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By default, no. If you're really interested, though, I could probably message you a sfw version?

let's just hope that sandbar stays loyal to his boyfriend I would hate to see their relationship fall apart

Oh geez, I really liked this chapter. The idea of it being extra hard for Ocellus to be able to handle a volatile emotional situation is really interesting––I've never thought of it that way but it makes a lot of sense.

I wonder how it's going to play out from here. It's usually at this point in the horror movie that the authorities don't believe that there's enough evidence and then someone gets seriously hurt.

And oh no, poor Gallus hahaha. I'm going to guess that dream at the end is either bait by the Nowhere King or it's Sandbar being completely wholesome and dreaming about having a fun time with his friend.

Next chapter’s gonna be Gallus fattening up to Yak weight to get Sandbar to like him? If not, can I write a chapter like that? If so, can someone write that for me? I’m not lazy. I’m just really bad at writing, especially with weight gain

Gallus, no. Bad boy. Go and talk to your boyfriend :trixieshiftright:.

come on gallus just talk to sandbar... i'm sure things will work out... just watch it be YONA'S dream he was seeing...

She eyed him smugly. “Yona know.”

I see you, Parker.

I just realized. Can Gallus tell whose dream he’s looking into? Because if not, it could be possible that this whole mess was caused by accidentally happening upon Yona’s dream and mistaking it for Sandbar’s

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😂 I thought that line and its delivery deserved more play!

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My take is that Ocellus would probably be the most resilient in a normally chaotic situation because she's used to being in a sea of emotions she can sense... but if someone dear to her was upset, she'd get overwhelmed--her own feelings crowding against those of the ones she loves.

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I'm so sorrrrrry! I had this plot written before canon did mean things to the best ship, so now it feels like I'm piling on. :fluttercry:

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I'd appreciate that, though just just marking when and where the sex begins and ends is good enough for me. I'm sorry, the story sounds good and I will read it, but I'm just not interested in gay sex. Also, why isn't there an OC tag?

Oh hell yeah. You really popped off with these two chapters. I think a longer length suits you––I adore the weekly updates, don't get me wrong, but if you were ever thinking of switching to biweekly then you'd have my support :raritywink:

The conclusion of this whole argument felt nicely satisfying, and the clop was hot.

I also liked the further use of Gallus's powers. They're really cool oh my god I love dream stuff let me tell you

Keep it up, Parker. You're only getting better as you go on. :heart:

this chapter was wholesome as hell and with a bit of heart warming sexiness to go with it! I really loved seeing Gallus and Sandbar finally get things sorted with that dream. the imitation of Silverstream actually made me laugh, also I absolutely loved the bit with the lunar guards and the "ew, dont be a perv" line keep up the good work!

It's nice to address how Gallus, new to his powers, would take dreams a lot more seriously than he should, considering how he can control his vs most everyone else. And good they talk it out. Thanks for not dragging it out needlessly. :twilightblush:

I'm loving the mix of danger and fun. Awesome job!

To interrupt that dream in particular...

They. Must. Die.

I particularly enjoyed where the dream was headed... damn you nowhere king, you interrupted a sexy dream

not only do I love new chapters but I LOVED seeing the dream motif here especially with Gallus at the end

BOY I sure do love me some Embrax :pinkiesmile:

Love all the pony tribe stuff, really interesting. Seems like a bunch of pieces are being lined up––Can't wait for the next chapter now that it seems like everyone's going into the Umbral Realm at the same time

There really need to be some sort of repercussion for invading another person's dream like that. Let alone a foreign leader.

It's always fun to get glimpses of the naughty dreams, especially when it's Ember and Thorax.

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