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Perfectly Insane


I've been writing for 9 years and I still don't know what I'm doing. https://ko-fi.com/perfectlyinsane

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Nightmare Night is coming soon, but this year, The Candy Mare has been set free! And this time, she has a different taste for her food.

She likes it roasted.

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Ah another contribute to the masterpiece that is Knackerman's Candymare. 😁

Having read the original, I can safely say this captures the spirit of the original and points out its flaws.

Well, I can say that Pinkie definitely tasted the sweet revenge. Or sweet irony? Whatever.

Despite you saying this was intended to be bad, I think I can say it was still readable and pretty amusing as a random genre. Just the good kind of bad. Like a parody video or something. Though in case you’ll need it for some good good story, remember to put dialogue tags and direct speech into the same paragraph :pinkiesmile:

Now I need to look up the original story!

It looks like Robot Chicken made its own version of something sweet to bite

🎵 The Candy Mare
The Candy Mare
The Candy mare can! 🎵

Pinkie had survived, the knockback from her atomic roast sent her flying for miles. The only thing stopping her was a pegasus that was minding his own business, he had recently woke up from someone hitting him in the head with a popcorn bucket. He was knocked out again by a flying black earth pony hitting him head on, causing them to crash land.

https://youtu.be/oiPrqKGkr5A


I wonder if Pinky's phrases can be understood as an insult? or not?

This is another addition to my personal masterpiece theatre.

Perfectly Insane
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11134569
Out of all my works to consider a masterpiece, why’d you choose this one?!😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

11134619
Sorry, I’m mildly (severely) eccentric.

Interesting death comedy.

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you know, sometimes I like to forget I wrote this.

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