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Wheller


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This story is a sequel to The Kindness of Strangers


After being terribly injured by an explosion in the post office, Derpy Hooves is released from the Royal Hospital in Canterlot, however Ponyville is not the same, quiet little town that she left behind, and her life starts taking turns that she would have never imagined.

Putting the Pieces Back together is a sequel to The Kindness of Strangers, which can be found here: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/389/The-Kindness-of-Strangers

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 27 )

Interesting....not only is Derpy the only one who actually bothered locking her door, she joins the Doctor and Trixie in being the only ponies in this series that seem to not immediately blurt out what they're thinking. Also, it's interesting to see that Trixie doesn't quite remember the two hooligans that made a moderately bad day into a disaster.

they are from the clan of order or somehing like that

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Actually, they seem to be from the clan of Chaos....the shadow of Order is what revived Pinkie Pie.

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You're both wrong. :derpytongue2:

You'll find out soon enough.

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Point taken. Whatever baffling thing is really going is bound to make the next installment of this continuity as entertainingly upsetting as the parent fiction.

Hmm... I note a distinct lack of Ditty Hooves/Doo. I find that VERY DESTURBING... :pinkiecrazy:

You broke Fluttershy? :pinkiecrazy:

YOU BROKE FLUTTERSHY?!? :flutterrage:

...you're going to make Pinkie the sane one, aren't you? :pinkiesad2::heart:

...or you could kill her off so she can pull an Optimus Prime. That's cool too... :applejackconfused:

I like it so far, now I shall read the next one.

WWWEEEEEEE :pinkiehappy: Great job! liked this one more than the first! onto the next!

But they just picked up Trixie? and where are the mane 6:rainbowhuh:

D'awww...

And where's Dinky? :rainbowhuh:

I haven't seen any Doctor Who before... I hope that doesn't mean I won't have any idea what's going on here... :unsuresweetie:

Poor Fluttershy... :fluttershysad:

Ominous unicorn is ominous...

Strange black cloud is... strange?

Oh-ho! Not one ominous unicorn, but three. And chaos too! Of course, this was written before Discord...

The Doctor.
most excellent.

I wonder... could this story be the one that set up the "Discorded Doctor Whooves" blog?

You should really link the next story to the series at the end of each of these. I keep having to sift through all your stories and figure out which one comes next. I'm trying to read all these so I will know the history to some of the more interesting looking ones later on in the series but this last one felt pretty dull. The first one was ok but suffered the same rushed pacing and lack of immersion. Not enough detail to make it really engaging in my opinion. Still, not bad for a start and I'm sure they got better with progression as you gained skill.

So she's just leaving Dinky behind?

Nightshadow is foreshadowing!!!

Oh god.....not the wibbly wobbly timey wimey thing again..............*i hit myself with a frying pan.*

739895 Remember when Trixie said she fudged up the details?

Im surprised at the lack of comments. I found this story years ago, (though i only read chapter 1 2 and 5 for some reason <.<) and i've come back to read them all ago.

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