Epilogue
Epilogue
“Late,” The pitch black unicorn said as a pegasus landed in front of him.
“I was busy doing what needed to be done Nightshadow,” Nightsinger said as he folded his wings inward. “It was your idea that I did after all.”
“My my, arguing as we always do, don’t we brothers?” another voice said as he stepped out of the darkness.
Nightcaller eyed the other two ponies before him. “It has been far too long since we were together, my brothers, let’s not spend the night arguing.”
Each of the three pitch black, amber eyed ponies nodded in agreement.
“Besides, we have much to celebrate; the age old enemy is finally dead!” Nightsinger said with a morbid cheerfulness.
“Indeed he is. Serves him right, he should have known better. Every tyrant is always disposed of.” Nightshadow said.
“While the death of order is something to celebrate, we have other things to do. More important things, we can celebrate when this world is consumed in chaos once again.” Nightcaller said. “Come my brothers, we have much work to do.”
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they are from the clan of order or somehing like that
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Actually, they seem to be from the clan of Chaos....the shadow of Order is what revived Pinkie Pie.
1277
You're both wrong.
You'll find out soon enough.
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Point taken. Whatever baffling thing is really going is bound to make the next installment of this continuity as entertainingly upsetting as the parent fiction.
...or you could kill her off so she can pull an Optimus Prime. That's cool too...
I like it so far, now I shall read the next one.
WWWEEEEEEE
Great job! liked this one more than the first! onto the next!
Oh-ho! Not one ominous unicorn, but three. And chaos too! Of course, this was written before Discord...
You should really link the next story to the series at the end of each of these. I keep having to sift through all your stories and figure out which one comes next. I'm trying to read all these so I will know the history to some of the more interesting looking ones later on in the series but this last one felt pretty dull. The first one was ok but suffered the same rushed pacing and lack of immersion. Not enough detail to make it really engaging in my opinion. Still, not bad for a start and I'm sure they got better with progression as you gained skill.