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Freezing Point


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Applejack and Fluttershy have never been particularly close; in all honesty they're more like acquaintances with mutual friends than actual friends with each other.
But when Winona is injured Fluttershy is the only one who can help, and as Applejack tries to pay back the debt she feels she owes the pegasus for her kindness they both discover that there might be more to each other, and their own feelings, than they realized.

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Comments ( 17 )

Sounds like this is gonna be a really great story! keep it up!!

Putting into read later for now, will read tonight with any luck. Fluttershy is everywife, I think. She just fits so well with any character she ships with! I'm just partial, as well, to AJ and her. Something about imagining AJ coming from the orchard to Fluttershy with some lemonade makes me feel warm and cozy at the image!

AppleShy, whoo! I really like the pacing of this, so far. Feels like it will allow for the relationship between AJ and 'Shy to develop at a nice, believable pace. :twilightsmile:

Epic so far! Waiting for more! :D

Interesting, will track to see where this goes.

Interesting. I'm gonna keep an eye on this.

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Something about imagining AJ coming from the orchard to Fluttershy with some lemonade makes me feel warm and cozy at the image!

That's such an adorable idea! Would you mind terribly if I borrowed it to use in this fic later on?

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Go for it. I got a ton of em! I read the first chapter and anticipate the next one. Good show!

I definitely want to see more of this. You're doing a good job of Applejack's characterization.

:pinkiehappy:Demand ALL thd updates!¡!¡!¡!¡!¡

Welp. I have to say that everything seems setup for some good cuddles. I hope Winona recovers w/o too much D: on her part. Everything seems genuine so far :pinkiehappy:

Dear author; yes, yes and yes.

Finally having a spare moment to myself today, I read through all the AppleShy I could find that I have not read. This amounted to one short February-style fic of three pages in length, and this.

Lovely phrasing, pacing I can agree with, and a host of other nice words that are so absolutely secondary to the fact that I got to submerge myself in somepony elses' AppleShy and just dream some fifteen minutes away. I am very, very intrigued.

This is great. Love the way it was written, loved the pacing and I can't wait to see how it progresses.

Fave'd for a great read.

Such a fun story. I'm hoping you pick this up soon and continued writing. I really looking forward to the day you update. :twilightsmile:

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