• Member Since 30th Jul, 2011
  • offline last seen May 21st, 2018

HiddenBrony


The proprietor of the series known as 'Sweet Special-Nothings'. Well known for the story Hop, Skip, and a Jump! And First Date. Also wrote the Conversion Bureau tale, A Mare's Tail.

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Fluttershy ends up spending all morning feeding the animals, and finds she has run out of food at home. Heading into Ponyville, the shy mare finds a fearsome storm is moving in, and finding an open shop is going to be tricky!

Chapters (5)
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Comments ( 33 )

all I have to say is awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww to this story it was very good keep up the great work :moustache:

:pinkiesad2::yay:

Very nicely done; I liked the tasteful shipping, instead of a pointless clop-fic. :twilightsmile:

Best shipping story I've read....but Flutterhy was pregnant at the end? Interesting. I want follow ups because it makes me as that this'll never be in the legit show :(

Please. Please. PLEASE make continuations, maybe like a series about what they go through as a couple...i'm gonna stop reading Shipping stories about the main 6 ponies because i love this one too much. great job, perfect story.

D'awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww:pinkiesad2::yay::twilightsmile:

:pinkiesad2: Sir, I've been writing my own Flutterfic. Flutterheart, if you care to read. I can honestly say that I truly like this story. Not just because it has a slow buildup as with mine, but the level of detail you put into this. My stories seem to be a bit bareboned And I just wanted to say that you did a magnificently good job with this.:twilightsmile: You sir, earn my respect.

I don't remember where I first read this, but I loved it. I was so excited to see it here. This is the first AppleShy story I read, and it was awesome.

This story gets me every time :D :pinkiehappy::rainbowkiss::twilightsmile::ajsmug:

"Wait, open? Pinkie?! PINKIE!":rainbowlaugh: and awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww:twilightsmile::fluttershyouch::raritywink::twilightsmile:

Not

Not is pleased. This story has satisfied me. Now Not shall rest.


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I am many things in many places. Here I am Not.

So adorable! :rainbowkiss: Your writing is very detailed and I am envious of your vocabulary. This is a long awaited addition to the first Fanfic that introduced me to this pairing, and it's great. Will there be more shorts like this one? :pinkiehappy:

Hah. Always good to see an old classic get some more attention. Will there be additional chapters?

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Yes, I do plan on showcasing different aspects of the relationship with further stories.

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Good to know. I actually re-read H, S & a J yesterday... I have quite a few fics saved that I like that I reread on occasion. Must have read this one... 30+ times by now. It doesn't take long. Anyway, imagine my surprise when the next morning I find a new chapter :P

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Yes, well, with finals over with I could let some of the stuff that's been filling my head out and onto the page. Even if it is a bit short, I'm quite pleased with this one.

The picture for this is interesting. And I find that Granny Smith with a Fluttershy re-texture looks disturbing...

You're, um. Warm.

lol.

nice job fluttershy

cute story... cant wait to read your others

...how do babies work again?:rainbowhuh:

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I recommend reading 'Running Rings.':trollestia:

A really cute new chapter for a great story. I love how easily Fluttershy alleviated Applejack's worries. Great job!:yay:

RBDash47
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This is my favorite piece of your Appleshy continuity. Very moody and atmospheric.

Aww, I was hoping for some cute awkwardness with them trying to sleep with one pillow :rainbowlaugh: Great stuff!

some one should tell granny smith that two mares cant have foals... well there is magic?

GAH this killed the end for me a lil

“Ah love you two, Sugarcube. And don’t let me ever forget it.”

"Too"

Arg.

Great story though. It kinda jumped around second chapter and sometimes it says hook instead of hoof.

EDIT: Huzzah! the statement is no longer doubled!

Awww, this was really nice to read. I'm planning a story myself and I had thought of using this pairing and after reading this I can see how it would really work out.

Excellent work.:yay::heart::ajsmug:

Awww yes :ajsmug::heart::yay: best ship ever!!! This is one of the most awesome, heart warming, beautiful stories i have ever read! Ok, it's THE best story i have ever read!!!

Such a wonderful, sweet story! Is (or will) thier story be continued?

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Yes.

Like, everywhere. So many of my stories deal with them.

Very cue fic! Appeshy is often difficult ship to pull off and you do a wonderful job with it, making sure every character feels just like themselves. Bravo! This is one of the better Appleshy shipfics I've read in ages.

That said, this fic does have some really rough spots. I noticed you sometimes have trouble with homophones and spelling (Nothing big, just a small handful that I noticed:twilightsmile:)

My only other suggestion would be that you try and pay a bit more attention to your scenes. I sometimes found that I was confused by the scene because I didn't have enough explanation of what was going on/who was in the scene. A good example is with AJ at the water cup. It wasn't really clear to me if she was sitting in a car or laying in a bed and how she was posed. When she gets the water she just put it down but since you didn't specify where I wasn't sure where to picture it.

This is all just my two cents and none of the stuff I say detracts from how sweet and fun this fic is. Just stuff to keep an eye out for in future.:twilightsmile:

Now to read more of your works!

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