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Flutterbrony
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i feel like i have read this before. weird
Pinkie Pie, you say? Well, you'll need to wait and find out! I'm taking this comment as you enjoyed it, which is motivation enough to keep writing. I'll try to post chapter two in a few hours.
Very cute. I love AppleShy. There seems to be a lack of it. I look forward to the next chapter. :D
This good, like Pat said there is not enough appleshy in the world. keep it up
I'm glad you guys like it. :D
I like the dialouge. You have a pretty decent style.
Very sweet so far - a pairing I'd not considered, too.
Tracking!
Well I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. :D I'll probably write chapter three tonight or tomorrow, but I should really be working on my end-of-semester assignments. But ponies first, at least I have my priorities straight!130787
Well I thank you. I'm glad that people are enjoying my story so far. :) 262 views, I didn't expect to go past 100.
Fluttershy is just too sweet!
Everypony loves Fluttershy! :D
The last paragraph made me D'AWWW
I don't love her, atleast I try not to, I don't want to make Applejack mad.
I'm glad I could make somebrony d'awww, my life is complete. :D
As for making Applejack mad, I'm sure she'd be able to handle some more love for Fluttershy.
this is great, but i found a few gramatical errors:
This was the day her and Applejack became a couple. should be
This was the day she and Applejack became a couple.
and
I was just thinking of getting some sweets for Applejack and I, should be
I was just thinking of getting some sweets for Applejack and me,
Thanks for the feedback. I guess some things slip through when editing your own work, huh? :/
It just has to be so adorable doesn't it?
Story is going smoothly and just makes you feel all kinds of warm inside.
Too cute!
I love this, i didn't even know appleshy existed but now it's my OTP.