Shining Armor and his wife prepare for one of the most important (albeit stressful) nights on the Empire's calendar. Both of them have planed out every detail to make sure that this annul peace summit goes to according to plan. Because that every single tiny microscopic little thing has to be thought out, it, of course, leaves them some degree of stress and worry.
Especially for the prince as after his wife asked him to go into their bedroom to fetch her dress, he finds somepony on that bed. Not only does that said pony is there in hopes of seducing him, but it is the last pony on the planet that he's expecting.
A major thank you to the funny and gracious TheVClaw who proofread this and to whom I dedicate this story to.
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I think it says a lot about my perverted mind when I see the ending of this story, and I'm more surprised by the fact that Shining is being the top.
In all seriousness though, this is an exceptionally well-done story regarding Shining/Sombra. It's one of my favorite M/M ships, and you did a great job pairing them in a cute and feasible way. Heck, I'm impressed you managed to do it without involving clop! Even I can't do that! (Although, that may just be because I'm a dirty little monkey~)
This was a great gift, and I hope this story gets a lot of positive feedback and appreciation. Who knows? Maybe it'll inspire more people to explore the underrated pairing.
Okay... That was awesome. I'm not even into yaoi and I found that a amazing. The back and forth between Sombra and Shining armor had my ribs aching from laughing so hard. well done here.
Is this a one-shot story or is there gonna be more? It's so well-written and adorable. And till the end I wondered who'd be the Dom in the story itself. There was also a lot to laugh and giggle abou.
It was a nice read, keep it up.
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Just to confirm, this is a one-shot.
My god... My sides!
Great shit.
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I got it this time you didn't take your sweet time to make it as complete.
bisexual shining for the win! about in the middle section starts out like a French farce (if nobody gets what is being reference listen to the commentary of Moulin rouge the 'baz lurhmann' film.) without a curtain. i'm like "Oh my god if cadence finds out!" turns out she was in on it the whole time. praise for being a good actress on her part.
Ooh, burn. He is right ya know
Disappointing :/ the lead up was amazing and everything you had was great but then you cut it.
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Meh, I can't please everyone every time.
This was fun, I always like fics where Cadance approves of this ship, while still happily being married to shining. nice work.
Heh, I thought at first this was going to be another Shining X Chrysalis fic. On seeing the tags my eyebrows raised significantly, and I was hooked to see where this might go. Only thing I'd hope for is that they use protection so Somby doesn't give Shiny something nasty after all he did to get that Issue One comic. Good and funny, while playful and naughty.